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You are improving.
Your poems are starting to flow a little bit better. Watch out for rhymes that are just there for the sake of rhyming. I hope I don't sound too harsh. Truly it is a good effort, if I sound like a school teacher, that's because I am one. So bear with me.
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marieclaire66
on July 2, 2006 at 7:58 PM
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