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thank you all!
I will keep them coming, I'll do my best.

posted by marieclaire66 on July 3, 2006 at 1:28 PM | link to this | reply

This one is nice.

posted by WindTapper on July 3, 2006 at 1:02 PM | link to this | reply

MarieClmaireclaire
Good write you have talent

posted by Kat02 on July 3, 2006 at 10:57 AM | link to this | reply

thank you Blanche, for your kind encouraging thoughts and poem.
the poem you just wrote in your comment is about me truly. 

posted by marieclaire66 on July 3, 2006 at 12:59 AM | link to this | reply

Marie-Claire, the ocean has always been an inspiration and a comfort to me,
I find myself now
on a strange shore
some time now has passed
since I landed here
gasping and shaken
grateful for breath
since the shipwreck tossed me
into the sea
struggling, finally too exhausted
 to swim
 lost all hope
then the currents carried me here
across this ocean
the past is far, far away

posted by Blanche. on July 3, 2006 at 12:17 AM | link to this | reply

you are so kind. thanks

posted by marieclaire66 on July 2, 2006 at 11:33 PM | link to this | reply

....this is lovely, beautiful.....i love the sea..... samhain_moon

posted by syzygy on July 2, 2006 at 11:26 PM | link to this | reply