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good haiku
and yes, i agree to reducing punctuation in haiku too.

posted by markng on July 4, 2006 at 6:59 PM | link to this | reply

It appears perfect to my non-technical eye.     Samahain_Moon

posted by syzygy on July 4, 2006 at 6:00 PM | link to this | reply

thanks for the info!
I am learning. Vive la France!

posted by marieclaire66 on July 4, 2006 at 4:32 PM | link to this | reply

Great one; I forgot you are in winter down under and Kiwi-style

But you needn't put a title, except a theme, for haiku. And maay I suggest politely, the aim is to reduce the need for punctuation, although elipses are being used as a subterfuge by many haijin.

As for FRANCE, soccer and Zidane the old man of TRICOLEUR, Viva L'France! Good Luck tomorrow.

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on July 4, 2006 at 4:19 PM | link to this | reply