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I think it is kind of weird and disturbing.
I have conflicting images in my mind as to what it means. I need to rework it and split it into two poems, because there are two strands of ideas flowing from it. It is too cryptic for my liking, but I want to hold on to the bubble idea which I like, but I need to take it further, don't quite know how.
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 6, 2006 at 4:04 PM
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MarieClaire....this is really COOL! Samhain_Moon 
posted by
syzygy
on July 6, 2006 at 3:23 PM
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What an unusual, but very effective verse.
Quite lively wriitng-
posted by
Passionflower
on July 5, 2006 at 9:01 PM
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