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PRIVET', MY FRIEND, NO I DON'T HAVE A PROBLEM WITH LOUD COLORS,
just not splattered all over multi-colored text. I get sea sick! What is up with that baby pic? Are you bored? Cause I, like, got some house painting you could do or something. Ya know? Good choice of ethnicity though. If I had been born Hawaiin, I bet that is exactly what I would look like! hahaha!
posted by
swftfox
on July 12, 2006 at 12:10 PM
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Hey Dave, I thought you had problems with color backgrounds! Loud yellows
I think of the sunshine whenI visit your blog. But I must pick on you lest you fall asleep. Shalom
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 12, 2006 at 11:39 AM
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Manda Lee!
Right back at ya! Thanks!
posted by
swftfox
on July 11, 2006 at 12:52 PM
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posted by
Amanda__
on July 11, 2006 at 9:16 AM
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Thanks Taps! I don't know why water spazzed me out so much
but it was fun! Cost me my sleep though!
posted by
swftfox
on July 11, 2006 at 9:11 AM
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Swftfox, I had to come back and read again. My favorite of all the water haiku is your chuckling waters. HAHAHA That's a winner in any language.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 11, 2006 at 6:26 AM
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Good work, Dave.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on July 11, 2006 at 6:18 AM
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What a collection!
such a variety of water haiku. The ICE riddle is particularly clever. :)
posted by
markng
on July 10, 2006 at 10:51 PM
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Hi again Dave, & Marieclaire & those attractive visitors that hang out here
Here's a gift:
French soccer star Zinedine Zidane, left, leaves the Elysee Palace aftera lunch with French President Jacques Chirac, right, on Monday July 10, 2006 in Paris.
(AP Photo/Patrick Kovarik, Pool)
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 10, 2006 at 9:37 PM
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enough said about me!
Nothing can match the majesty of a French aristocratic brain... syllables not counted.
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 10, 2006 at 8:41 PM
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And sometimes it is...water water everywhere...
And sometimes it is
Water water everywhere
but not a drop to drink
posted by
Straightforward
on July 10, 2006 at 6:12 PM
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Uh, OK! I just dont know my waterfalls! hahaha Gonna be gone a few hours!
posted by
swftfox
on July 10, 2006 at 1:12 PM
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Victoria Falls, can't say if its from the Zimbabwe side or South African
Named after the Queen of the empire herself. (Pardon me your Majesty, I opught to have said Queen Victoria, REGIS Imperia Brittanica). Just thought a Waterfall I knew from Africa was a nice diversion
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 10, 2006 at 1:03 PM
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Ypun! I guess you got me here! I have no clue! But I have to get to work
and go drive my limousine! I can handle Marie Claire if the goons don't get me! hahaha You know she has trouble with syllables because if she writes in French and then translates it, the syllable count changes! Poor girl!
posted by
swftfox
on July 10, 2006 at 12:59 PM
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A picture is worth a million syllables
Can you guess the title?
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 10, 2006 at 12:41 PM
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Dave SWFTFOX, do you sleep, eat, dream, and get wet with haiku? R wet pants
I am in awe! As I said elsewhere---wonder if it was in YPUNDAY's haiku?-- that you are a ZEN Artist, or heart-tistic artist. Marieclaire asked me to hire some goons for your "Bubbling" jokes. Watch out
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 10, 2006 at 12:36 PM
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Swftfox, you covered so much here it took me a bit to think of a new twist on water for YPunday's haiku blog. But, there's one there now that you missed. LOL
posted by
TAPS.
on July 10, 2006 at 10:43 AM
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HOW MANY TIMES I BEGGED YOU TO UNDERSTAND
THE PURE SOULS HAD NEVER LIVED IN MUDDY DIRTY LAND
THE MIND AND THE SOUL HAD JOINT YOUR SHORES AND YOUR SAND
WHY IS THE UGLY DOUTFULL FOR WHAT YOU HAVE IN YOUR HAND
NO ONE EVER CAN HURT THE MAN GOD HAD HIM IN HIS HAND
I CAN READ I CAN FULLY UNDERSTAND
YOU ARE NOT THE ONE TO BELAME
IT IS THE SMALL WHISPERS KILLED THE TRUST IN THE NAME
IT IS NOT WHO ANY ONE COULD BE BELAME
IT IS THE AQUARIAN AGE THE WEARDOE HISTORY
I AM BOOK IF YOU NEED TO READ
I CAN GIVE YOUR MIND THE RITE LOOK TO CAN LEAD
TRY ME NO ONE CAN EVER HURT YOU
BECAUSE I LOVE YOUR RED WHITE BLUE
I CAN TRANSLATE THEIR ONLY TONGUES
I CAN GIVE YOU ALL MY PURE SONGS
LET ME BE IN YOUR MIND IN YOUR SOUL
I WILL LIVE IN YOUR HEART IN YOUR ALL
DO NOT LAUGH DO NOT MAKE JOKES FOR MY LOVE TO YOU
IT IS NOT YOUR NAME OR HIS NAME IT IS MY RED WHITE BLUE
THANK YOU AND YOU AND YOU
STRANGER HER NAME NAJWA POWLEY??????????????????????????????/
posted by
NAJWA
on July 10, 2006 at 10:38 AM
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Thanks Cool! Join in Ypunday's contest?
posted by
swftfox
on July 10, 2006 at 9:50 AM
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Well scribed
posted by
coolacen
on July 10, 2006 at 9:32 AM
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