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WriterofLight--glad u r glad I still visit. Pleasure indeed to see R poetry
And U R WELCOME because good news ought NOT be hidden a la GOSPEL. Anything to throw light & illumination. WE may disagree, as I do with my Hindu,Christian, Jewish and Muslim friends. But when you still can talk and argue with me without calling each other names, I become elated about the future. Shalom
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 17, 2006 at 7:48 PM
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Thanks for the plug, YPunday!
Interesting point about "irrevocably." I couldn't come up with another word that fit better, but thanks for the inspiration to keep at it.
posted by
WriterofLight
on July 17, 2006 at 7:45 PM
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Welcome, Najwa and Taps!
Wonderful thought, Najwa!
posted by
WriterofLight
on July 17, 2006 at 7:44 PM
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Its very good, WriterofLight. I love that time of morning.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 10, 2006 at 10:31 PM
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Glad I checked out your poetry......EVERYBODY, read this. Good stuff
Some memorable lines, which usually elevates the poet, or keeps memories of him or her alive:
"until we open our eyes to ash gray waking.
The soul that has lost its dreams
lives only in ash gray waking," TRUE, Indeed. One nit: "irrevocably" is too long for the rhythm and ambience you had achieved in this gem of a poem. Bravo 
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 10, 2006 at 10:27 PM
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ALL POETS ON THE EARTH ARE DREAMERS
posted by
NAJWA
on July 10, 2006 at 10:05 PM
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