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bonne nuit swftfox, fais de beaux rêves. Ask Ypunday for the
translation, he is the expert after all....
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 11, 2006 at 11:48 PM
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Dave, I did end with mentioning how wonderful your Blogit friends think u R
so, maybe, she understood me, despite my French accent. Where's marieclaire.....she does not believe my accent is French, just French Canadian.
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 11, 2006 at 10:19 PM
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Oh My God, Ypun! What have you done!? hahaha O.K. after that comment,
in two days time I will post my HOT poem. you have it cumming! hahahaha Or will have!
posted by
swftfox
on July 11, 2006 at 10:16 PM
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WELL, TAPS, that made me cry. I guess in the misery of the day
I forget sometimes to finish it out and see if there isn't a antidote at the very end. God does have a nice schedule and He knows more about what is good than I do. Thank you for the effort you put into sharing that. It was eye opening and heartwarming! I love a good sunset!
posted by
swftfox
on July 11, 2006 at 10:15 PM
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YPunday, You do go on. LOL. That was last years poem after my evening walk and a beautiful sunset on the lake. Swftfox wanted to read it because our poem titles were pretty much the same.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 11, 2006 at 10:12 PM
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Oh...is this the one u wrotelast night,& told Dave/swftfox about just now?
Either way, my hats off to you, Poet Majesty! I am overwhelmed by your skill, your vocabuklary and mostof all, your upbeat spirit that is so comforting.
Amen
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 11, 2006 at 10:10 PM
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TAPS, you ought ot be on TV, at least every day in April (poetry month)
This is superb! Wow...wow...and WOW! Did you just write this one after the sunset, and evaluated your day. It is so uplifting, whatever u did or thought. The last two lines take it to new heights......asking, inviting, almost copmmanding Divinity to be here, and again, for all of us, tomorrow. Alelujah!
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 11, 2006 at 10:07 PM
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Dave I emailed Sunqueen. Will check the wb site tomorrow. I need Zzzzzzs
unlike you. But glad you told them NO! Gotta take care of your fine wife's husband!
But wait till she reads my email. You got a thing coming, or shall I say cumming? Serious now--did u check the new haiku?
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 11, 2006 at 10:04 PM
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After enjoying a gorgeous sunset.....
IT IS FINALLY OVER
Why does the day end on such a lovely note,
like the grand finale of a glorious toccata
when the day has been so long and wearing
with a fly in every ointment?
Why the sky-blue pink and flame-colored clouds
mirrored in the lake smooth as glass
but for the wake of the duck's last swim,
when the day was so dark and drear?
Why the peaceful silence that accentuates
the call of the loon welcoming the night
and gratefulness to my soul
after the pandemonium of the day?
Is this an expression of apology
for what I've been through this day?
Is it a colorful utterance of your love and care
or a wonderful promise of a new tomorrow?
posted by
TAPS.
on July 11, 2006 at 10:02 PM
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YPUN! Sometimes I force myself to use a different cadence just to try
to keep out of a rut. I think that is what I did here! There is more coming! But I want to spread them out so I don't have to work too hard. Can you believe tonight, about 10 after having only 7 hours of sleep in three days, they called me to go out again to rescue a broken down limo. I simply told them no. Plain and simple....NO! About my wife! Please do! Seriously! You would love to talk to her and she loves to meet people from all countries and walks of life. Uh, also from other planets but lets not go there! hahaha
sunqueen777@yahoo.com and her website
www.sunqueenart.com
posted by
swftfox
on July 11, 2006 at 9:51 PM
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TAPS! I would love to read it! Let me know when and if you post it!
Keep watching my poetry blog cause in a couple days I'm taking revenge on all of you who have been talking this great sensuality and I'm gonna blow you all out of the water! You might want to be alone when you read it!
posted by
swftfox
on July 11, 2006 at 9:48 PM
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Swftfox, I did a double take here because I have a poem that I wrote last year titled
It Is Finally Over. I had to dig mine out because I really had forgot what it was about. LOL. But, even though they are both about a long hard day, they are quite different from each other.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 11, 2006 at 9:42 PM
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I heard about r schedule these last few days.R poem has a lilting quality
that shows your abunant energy. Not a sleepy line at all. A man who accepts what comes his way, with faith and grace. Unless, you are not telling us ALL. Maybe we could ask the wife, hey!
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 11, 2006 at 9:31 PM
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