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I hadn't read this till now
What a beautifully sensitive tribute to the memory of your son.. I hope you will continue to find comfort, you write such moving poetry.
posted by
mneme
on July 19, 2006 at 4:40 AM
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The icons may help summarize...if I don't don't headbutt me, PLEASSEEEEeeee
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 14, 2006 at 6:26 PM
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thanks so much guys. I appreciate your kindness.
Here I am crying again, but that's because I am touched.
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 13, 2006 at 5:50 PM
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Amen! Marie, this is the best for you! At least you are not trying to hide
in your sorrow or loss. You express your self (very nicely also) and let it out. This is very healthy. It also is a memorial to your son's life, we never see about his death. You are concentrating on the right things. You have the love and prayers and support of everyone here!
posted by
swftfox
on July 13, 2006 at 5:33 PM
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Your concluding lines are as powerful as they come. Steady--enjoy past &
present as they weave and interweave in mind, heart and spirit. Shalom. These lines reach up there--way, way up:
"In the present past
With all my heart
My heavenly son." ---the last line is simple, but also profound in the reading.
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 13, 2006 at 4:49 PM
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ME TOO
posted by
NAJWA
on July 13, 2006 at 1:57 PM
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SOME TIME PEOPLE SING OR LAUGH BUT MAY BE THEY HAVE CANCER OR ANYAMERIZM ON THE BRAIN AND THEY WILL DIE VERY SOON WITHOUT KNOWING THE REAL TIME
BUT THE BRUST AND THE GRIEVE DOES NOTMAKE PEOPLE DIE
MAKE THEM SIGH
SO MAY BE THE ONE WHO CRY THAT HE WILL DIE
HE IS THE ONE VERY ILL AND NO ONE CAN TELL
BECAUSE HE SINGS STIL
STRANGER
NAJWA
posted by
NAJWA
on July 13, 2006 at 1:56 PM
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