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marieclaire, I like it the way it is.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 19, 2006 at 4:59 PM
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Okay--peekaboo. You come and go...camme camme camelion, u come& go
Hope you get a good theme for tonight. Your turn's up, mate!
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 19, 2006 at 2:11 PM
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I agree w/ .Dave (not seft dave). I do agree w/ him too; but re. your poem
I like it. It works. The spacing is also effective --format, that is. But myown poems are never finished. Feel free to re-qork them. I would just try to shorten the longer lines since some of tham have effective one-word lines anyway. (This time u get a flower...no matter who says what
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posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 19, 2006 at 2:05 PM
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I'm happy with bunches of images.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on July 19, 2006 at 9:36 AM
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