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Ooops it's you Swftfox talking about haibun so sorry the comment is
adressed to you. Here I am confused again! I think I'd better leave this stupid computer alone for a while. Nite.
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 21, 2006 at 11:56 PM
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No it was a whale of an effort but I had a whale of a time.
Ypun I have no idea about different styles and poetry and techniques, so you tell me. I just write in whatever format or style that suits my mood at the time. have not a clue about technique, I am a natural that's why!.... I don't let ignorance get in the way of my poem or I would never write anything.
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 21, 2006 at 11:54 PM
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Vey nice
Another really enjoyable poem:) You make it look easy, Marie-Claire.
posted by
mneme
on July 21, 2006 at 11:21 PM
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That took a whale of an effort I am sure! Pretty cool. It almost seems like
antoher form of Japanese poetry called renku or another called haibun. Anyway, nice writing! You are coming along nicely. Your poetry is nice too! hahaha
posted by
swftfox
on July 21, 2006 at 11:15 PM
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yeah great minds think alike.
where are we supposed to park our spiders, no place to go tonight?
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 21, 2006 at 11:04 PM
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Serrendipity! Iam first--I wrote similar poems & sumitted
Now maybe we can start a blog with this style because so far as I know, only the two of us write in this way. But all that says, I loved it, and the contratsing threeliners! Congrats and Shalom--
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 21, 2006 at 3:41 PM
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