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Wow, very good and to me it didnt seem too long because it
kept me captured. With practice and help maybe I can be almost as good someday. Thanks.
posted by
steeler_fan
on July 27, 2006 at 10:47 AM
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Dave, perhaps you may shortent his and submit to journals/online?
enjoyed this one---thanks for helping preserve our planetary riches for the children
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 27, 2006 at 7:31 AM
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"preserve Earth, it's not our's"-Dave's poem wants to c God as we pollute,
all of the graceful planet...I have looked at the behemoths on the ocean that are aircraft carriers and think of all the sea life they injure, kill and pollute. Strage thoughts---but loving and caring of EARTH and the future owners of it. Shalom, my brother. Praise God!
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 27, 2006 at 6:21 AM
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WOW
posted by
NAJWA
on July 26, 2006 at 11:06 PM
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i have a funny poem about behemoth wonder where I put it.
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 26, 2006 at 7:44 PM
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THANK YOU BOTH! I OCCASIONALLY LIKE TO USE BIG WORDS!
Makes me feel like I have a vocabulary. I actually do know what they mean! hahaha Does any one care? I hope my poem might someday wake some people up.
posted by
swftfox
on July 26, 2006 at 6:46 PM
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some brilliant lines, I like it!
In agony; as oceans
Fling themselves landward
In wild abandon
As tourists pause
For just one more photo.
such good lines, so true and sad. Does anyone care???
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 26, 2006 at 6:41 PM
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A lot of excellent words in that poem ...
I've always liked using "putrification" and "espouse" ... "behemoth", too.
Homohobophobia (n): Fear of homeless homosexuals
posted by
Mademoiselle
on July 26, 2006 at 6:39 PM
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