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One step at a time is still a step
and it means you are not standing still. Keep writing, we enjoy your poems so much :)
posted by
mneme
on July 28, 2006 at 3:44 AM
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You are all ever so kind, you don't know how down I feel at times.
You must have caught me on a good day so make the most of it. Hopefully there will be more good days, but one step at a time for me.
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 28, 2006 at 1:35 AM
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Marie
This was a joy to read and I needed to read this tonight~
posted by
Offy
on July 27, 2006 at 6:09 PM
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Marie
That was motivating!
Nice...... about taking chances, being brave, not fearing the risks!
posted by
BlondeAmbition007
on July 27, 2006 at 12:27 PM
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alright sweetie.
did not sleep well, very cold and I was frozen! Had to have a hot steaming bath in the middle of the nitght to warm up!
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 27, 2006 at 12:24 PM
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This was a very very good poem Marie! You have outdone yourself.
How are you doing today?
posted by
swftfox
on July 27, 2006 at 8:47 AM
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Good writing.Enjoyable. Last stanza is NOT on title of poem, but it's OKAY
Thanks for the great haiku you submitted yesterday to YPUN
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 27, 2006 at 5:56 AM
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Very pleasant, marie-claire
There is something in the air... muser is writing about harmony and you about happy waterfalls
I hope we will all find much more in common as time goes by.
posted by
mneme
on July 27, 2006 at 4:31 AM
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posted by
NAJWA
on July 27, 2006 at 2:08 AM
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