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One step at a time is still a step
and it means you are not standing still.  Keep writing, we enjoy your poems so much :)

posted by mneme on July 28, 2006 at 3:44 AM | link to this | reply

You are all ever so kind, you don't know how down I feel at times.
You must have caught me on a good day so make the most of it. Hopefully there will be more good days, but one step at a time for me.

posted by marieclaire66 on July 28, 2006 at 1:35 AM | link to this | reply

Marie
This was a joy to read and I  needed to read this tonight~

posted by Offy on July 27, 2006 at 6:09 PM | link to this | reply

Marie

That was motivating!

Nice...... about taking chances, being brave, not fearing the risks!

 

posted by BlondeAmbition007 on July 27, 2006 at 12:27 PM | link to this | reply

alright sweetie.
did not sleep well, very cold and I was frozen! Had to have a hot steaming bath in the middle of the nitght to warm up!

posted by marieclaire66 on July 27, 2006 at 12:24 PM | link to this | reply

This was a very very good poem Marie! You have outdone yourself.
How are you doing today?

posted by swftfox on July 27, 2006 at 8:47 AM | link to this | reply

Good writing.Enjoyable. Last stanza is NOT on title of poem, but it's OKAY
Thanks for the great haiku you submitted yesterday to YPUN

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on July 27, 2006 at 5:56 AM | link to this | reply

Very pleasant, marie-claire
There is something in the air... muser is writing about harmony and you about happy waterfalls I hope we will all find much more in common as time goes by.

posted by mneme on July 27, 2006 at 4:31 AM | link to this | reply

posted by NAJWA on July 27, 2006 at 2:08 AM | link to this | reply