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beaut comment Troosha! It is so true!
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 28, 2006 at 10:30 AM
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I thinkin this piece you were writing to all three Gods
Despair, Hope, and Delight. Enjoyed it!
posted by
Troosha
on July 28, 2006 at 9:47 AM
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swftfox, you know what I mean! protection from my own stupidity more like.
life can be so cruel sometimes.
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 28, 2006 at 9:41 AM
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Marie! Do you seek protection from me? I'm hurt! Well, knowing
what a dashing figure I am, I totally understand! hahaha This is a wonderful poem. Reminiscent of the Psalms! I have been reading them a lot last couple days. Maybe why I'm in a better mood! I like your style here and you seem to gravitate to it a lot. It suits you and you use it well! Later dear!
posted by
swftfox
on July 28, 2006 at 7:45 AM
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MC, the other comments reassure you that R poetry topics are valid. U do it
best when you have a deep concern, or anguish. I agreew ith AZUR, sometimes "just go with the flow." We all have needs, and God is an understanding Parent, who knows exactly how we were created...Shalom
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 28, 2006 at 7:09 AM
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posted by
shypettite
on July 28, 2006 at 4:29 AM
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well I favour the impossible safer that way.
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 28, 2006 at 4:01 AM
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well that depends who I am talking to.... anything I sure can write,
anything goes! I just can't help myself, keeps me out of mischief, or does it? Words should be like birds, they should fly out of your hands and break free.
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 28, 2006 at 3:41 AM
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Lovely
we all fall sometimes but sometimes we must go with the flow
posted by
Azur
on July 28, 2006 at 3:38 AM
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You do no such thing
as make a fool of yourself... I like the way you can write your poems about any subject under heaven.
PS - have discovered the Orchid Poetry blog - this is fun.
posted by
mneme
on July 28, 2006 at 3:35 AM
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Beautiful thought woven in a lovely poem. Thanks.
posted by
afzal50
on July 28, 2006 at 2:02 AM
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