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Troosha
i definitely agree with those lines...when i was writing them those two stood out beyond most of them. most of my writings tend to hint towards love, though i try and disguise it.
posted by
penguinrock26
on July 28, 2006 at 9:35 PM
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Mademoiselle
i didn't realize it was supposed to be upbeat, maybe i'll try and write a happy poem tomorrow, though i don't think i'm as good at them, but who knows, i'll try.
posted by
penguinrock26
on July 28, 2006 at 9:32 PM
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Teddy
thank you...i like the haunting stuff myself too.
posted by
penguinrock26
on July 28, 2006 at 9:31 PM
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I think what I liked most was:
Melody and pain
Dabbling in paint
The poem in general encompasses numerous nuances of love.
posted by
Troosha
on July 28, 2006 at 5:43 PM
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That's pretty good ...
Although, to be perfectly honest, it's not very upbeat.
"Impeach Mayor McCheese!"
posted by
Mademoiselle
on July 28, 2006 at 12:21 PM
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Haunting...superb work!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on July 28, 2006 at 11:56 AM
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