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where are you hiding I am lonely...
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 30, 2006 at 11:07 PM
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Hey Ypun! I hope you realize I was talking to Sweet Marie!
Glad you like my stuff! I mean, the poetry, pics, etc. You know....
posted by
swftfox
on July 30, 2006 at 11:03 PM
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Baby! there is always plenty for you!
posted by
swftfox
on July 30, 2006 at 11:02 PM
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hello honey I am back!
What's cooking, did you leave me any?
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 30, 2006 at 10:19 PM
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Quite the chatterbox--I mean chatterboxes (u and MC). Fun poem, not punny
great light read tho i felt lightheaded after that timber hit me head.
NOW I CALL THE RHYTHM 'EL PASO RAP' 
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 30, 2006 at 9:34 PM
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Bye Bye!
posted by
swftfox
on July 30, 2006 at 8:25 PM
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That's what I hear! Tempting. Do I know anybody there!?
We would get in so much trouble. I have no will power and you will have no power to resist my charm!
posted by
swftfox
on July 30, 2006 at 8:24 PM
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Now I really have to go. talk to you later.
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 30, 2006 at 8:24 PM
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come to NZ perfect climate 4 u nice people too. Ha ha
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 30, 2006 at 8:23 PM
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Oh yeah! Kiss, Kiss back darlin!
posted by
swftfox
on July 30, 2006 at 8:23 PM
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crazy climate, what's the world coming too?
Thankfully there are a few kind people like you left?! Last kiss good by.
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 30, 2006 at 8:22 PM
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I can't stand it. I had a heat stroke of sorts 30 years ago and you never
come back from that. That is why so many jobs are unavailable for me. Can't be out in it that much. Even AC doesn't help sometimes. That is one reason I feel so poorly lately! But I never quit!
posted by
swftfox
on July 30, 2006 at 8:22 PM
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Wow that's really hot! How do you stand it?
Kiss kiss I must go,
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 30, 2006 at 8:21 PM
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Oh...Oh., o.k. I feel better now. Thanks for the kindness. You go when
ever you need to and I'll go to basement and find my pics.
posted by
swftfox
on July 30, 2006 at 8:20 PM
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Temp in Celcius is 43.3 and we have had basically no rain for weeks.
Just read the news and 60% of the U.S. is in a drought. They already promise food prices are gonna skyrocket along with gas. So nice to have something to look forward to! 
posted by
swftfox
on July 30, 2006 at 8:19 PM
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sweetie darlin calm down, here here, feeling better?
I am just being polite because I have to go now I am just letting you know so you are not all alone when I go.
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 30, 2006 at 8:19 PM
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if I don't hear I will be gone for an hour or so
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 30, 2006 at 8:17 PM
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I'm right freaking here! What do you mean if I don't reply!? I been talking
your leg off all night! 
Had to go yell at the dogs! Barking too much, neighbors complain.
posted by
swftfox
on July 30, 2006 at 8:17 PM
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poor doggy havin an off day in Dave's car and carpet.
You make a right pair. What is the temperature in Celsius, here it is raining.
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 30, 2006 at 8:16 PM
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I am going to leave you, don't cry, just one more minute
No more hugs till you reply.
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 30, 2006 at 8:14 PM
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You told me to stop hiding you wouldn't hurt me! Askeered is mountain man
"scared", I'm not scared of you, i.e. I'm not askeered of you!
posted by
swftfox
on July 30, 2006 at 8:14 PM
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Not so bad! Only about 110 today...I mean this week! I took a drive this
afternoon to take some pics to replace the ones I can't use in my haiku book and I took Sapphire. Even with the AC on she got sick and threw up inthe car! Nice. She has left me a little something special every where we have been today! How nice! This is the first time! 
posted by
swftfox
on July 30, 2006 at 8:13 PM
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what? now I am really confused.
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 30, 2006 at 8:13 PM
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sorry don't get it,
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 30, 2006 at 8:12 PM
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I'm not askeered of you!
posted by
swftfox
on July 30, 2006 at 8:11 PM
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i feel guilty stuffing around computer all day. Is it still hot where you
are?
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 30, 2006 at 8:11 PM
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Oh, o.k. Blank screen?! Well, stay in one place and quit hopping around!
Like a bunny! Play..., never mind. Ta Da! I'm finished. 400 pieces of paper and almost an entire ink cartridge. But all printed except the variants of some of the military poems. I have one to a girl friend (not mine) that I adapted six different ways to accomodate a girl leaving for deployment, a boy leaving, a girl staying, a boy staying, a friend leaving, a friend staying......you get it!
posted by
swftfox
on July 30, 2006 at 8:11 PM
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Dave stop hiding you know I wont hurt you.
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 30, 2006 at 8:09 PM
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this is boring you know staring at a blank screen, do something!
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 30, 2006 at 8:08 PM
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yeah scare me, but nicely!
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 30, 2006 at 8:07 PM
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Monkey business with you? You don't even want me to go there here! hahaha
I'm gonna be here a little while. I am almost done with printing, then I am gonna bring up my picture box and find some treasures to share with everyone and some to share with you! hahaha Scared?
posted by
swftfox
on July 30, 2006 at 8:05 PM
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tell me when u r goin Im gettin restless here.
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 30, 2006 at 8:03 PM
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I know!
So do you want monkey business with me???
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 30, 2006 at 8:03 PM
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That is so funny! First off, the theme doesnt have to exist in Japan!
And what makes you think they don't have BIG monkeys in Japan? You make me laugh! You are soooo cute!
posted by
swftfox
on July 30, 2006 at 8:00 PM
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Now you owe me one, as good as I gave you!
I got us a theme for tonight, it is monkeys! cause they have them in Japan little ones I gather.
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 30, 2006 at 7:52 PM
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Oh Yeah! That hug felt goooooood! I won't describe it but trust me. One of
the better hugs in a while! 
posted by
swftfox
on July 30, 2006 at 7:45 PM
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Sapphire just ran under the table. Good place for her tonight!
I'll send some pics later. I might go back and edit that poem and add some pics there! I didn't think about it! I'm still printing poetry out. Whew! Been at it about 7 hours. Still got bunch to go and then I have to collate into three piles. Then I can start working on putting a manuscript together! All this for fame and fortune!
posted by
swftfox
on July 30, 2006 at 7:44 PM
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come over here, here is a hug.
for you
for Saphire
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 30, 2006 at 7:35 PM
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Kansas and maybe Oklahoma too!!
posted by
Offy
on July 30, 2006 at 7:34 PM
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Swftie where is the pic?
I have never beeeen there, you got to take me places.
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 30, 2006 at 7:34 PM
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Anyplace is nicer than El Paso! Except for maybe anywhere in
southwestern Kansas! hahaha. I am cozied up to Sapphire and I was repayed for my love and kindness with poop on the new carpet. Thank God I got her problem cleared up but she still got a boot outside! Everybody craps on me! 
O.K. Not everybody!
posted by
swftfox
on July 30, 2006 at 7:33 PM
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swift
Go for it...NZ is much nicer than EL Paso!!
posted by
Offy
on July 30, 2006 at 7:29 PM
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hello hun who are u cozzying up to?
I don't know El Paso any more than you know NZ, so you come here and I go there, and we swap tales? how zz that?
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 30, 2006 at 7:25 PM
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Paradise and El Paso are NOT acquainted! I was there for two weeks
selling my etched glass at Ft. Bliss! Bliss, can you imagine anything out there with that name? hahaha
posted by
swftfox
on July 30, 2006 at 6:58 PM
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swift
It's better than what it was...tomorrow I am going to the doctor. I couldn't imagine having sinus and a tooth on top of it...OUCH!!!
Yes ElPaso...I flew Southwest to San Diego several times, but one time I got stuck there. Ended up staying the night...What a nasty place..Why can't I get stuck in paradise ??? LOL~
posted by
Offy
on July 30, 2006 at 6:41 PM
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Is that place a desolate rock or WHAT! hahaha Thanks! I'm glad you
enjoyed it. How are your sinuses? That can be murder, I know. I have a cracked tooth that has been fractured about 22 years now. It impacts the sinus nerves and once in a while it flares up and might just as well stay in bed. Hope you are better!
posted by
swftfox
on July 30, 2006 at 6:35 PM
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swift
I really enjoyed this happy poem..and I know what you mean about El Paso...
posted by
Offy
on July 30, 2006 at 6:22 PM
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