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Marie I do the same thing write thing that are just in my head but have nothing to do with me just words in my head

posted by Kat02 on August 8, 2006 at 10:39 AM | link to this | reply

cheeky chookie you are!

posted by marieclaire66 on August 7, 2006 at 5:52 PM | link to this | reply

better a wuss-ie than palying hookie when u optta play goosey-goosey

gander!

recall the nursery rhyme

 

where shall I wander?

Upstairs and downstairs in marie's chamber there I met an old man

who couldn't say his prayers

 

the stairs went crack---

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on August 7, 2006 at 5:39 PM | link to this | reply

Ypun don't be such a wuss!

posted by marieclaire66 on August 7, 2006 at 5:20 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks for clarifying--everything
I recalled the word--related to food--but I am not that thrilled to hear what u do to male ducks and geese to get fat livers for your "foie de gras"!!!  but thanks for the lesson, or lessons  SHALOM

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on August 7, 2006 at 4:52 PM | link to this | reply

azur
well just in case, some people take offence, I suppose I don't want people to think that everything I write about actually happened. People will believe anything.

posted by marieclaire66 on August 7, 2006 at 4:05 PM | link to this | reply

I am glad you do write them
no need to add the clause, well not for me anyway

posted by Azur on August 7, 2006 at 3:49 PM | link to this | reply

okay the word is "une oie" pronuounced wa
une oie

posted by marieclaire66 on August 7, 2006 at 3:27 PM | link to this | reply

Ypun this poem has a few real life elements to it, come to think of it.
but not what you think. It is too personal to discuss on a blog or with anyone in particular.

posted by marieclaire66 on August 7, 2006 at 3:26 PM | link to this | reply

You got to teach me the French word for goose; I knew it
It ought to come back---come back my goose; fly--waddle--haik--whatever you do, do not delay the poetry  today====shalom, my friend (thanks for the email)

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on August 7, 2006 at 3:25 PM | link to this | reply

No worries Jazwolf, writer's intent does not always coincide with readers'
intent? are not they supposed to meet somewhere along the line surely?

posted by marieclaire66 on August 7, 2006 at 3:24 PM | link to this | reply

Marie---- I apologize for the repetitions. Blogit belched.

posted by Jazwolf on August 7, 2006 at 3:13 PM | link to this | reply

Good write...as u say, no one inspired this. But it's therapy, jus in case
someone close to you in the past either felt betrayed or falsely accused a close family member of friend of it...hence the resolution. Yeah--I love playing psychoanalyst! Haik away now--flowers/smiles/peace..

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on August 7, 2006 at 2:47 PM | link to this | reply

Marie--- Loved that last paragraph. So much of creativity is about
"taking notes." Readers and critics then apply "intent." Also liked the prose.

posted by Jazwolf on August 7, 2006 at 1:45 PM | link to this | reply

Marie--- Loved that last paragraph. Much of the creative process is about
"taking notes." Readers and critics then put "intent" to what was written.

posted by Jazwolf on August 7, 2006 at 1:43 PM | link to this | reply

Marie--- Loved that last paragraph. Much of the creative process is about
"taking notes." Readers and critics then put "intent" to what was written.

posted by Jazwolf on August 7, 2006 at 1:42 PM | link to this | reply