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I think a child will enjoy these poems
posted by
Root05
on August 15, 2006 at 2:24 PM
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Thank you Mountain climber. By the way, I am gonna be in the
Rockies next week! Yippeeeeee! I talked with my wife last night about these poems and we are going to start working on a children'sbook. She will illustrate of course and I write! Cool! team work!
posted by
swftfox
on August 14, 2006 at 10:18 AM
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SwftFox -- Very well written -- a child will find pleasure in them!
posted by
MountainClimber57
on August 14, 2006 at 9:31 AM
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I love that picture! You have discovered one of my weaknesses!
I play ever so slightly with Chinese Brush Painting and before the week is up I am going to try my hand at one. Very simplistic and perhaps only three colors, like haiku. I would love to illustrate my own haiku!
posted by
swftfox
on August 14, 2006 at 9:05 AM
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I have jumped into many leaf piles--especially one's others rake up
enjoy world beauty and peace-paz!
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on August 14, 2006 at 2:37 AM
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It is obvious my friend, that you have never jumped in a leaf pile!
posted by
swftfox
on August 13, 2006 at 6:23 PM
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LOvely--just lovely. The second one
will be a winner with young readers, in my not-so-famously -humble opinion. Shalom
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on August 13, 2006 at 4:45 PM
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Thank you my sweet! 'Twas the mermaids that inspired me to try this!
Yours was fun to read but I found myself wanting to be there to partake of the young worms! hahaha, well, I think that's what I wanted! lol
posted by
swftfox
on August 13, 2006 at 1:10 PM
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Dave that is absolutely delightful! brilliant!
YOu are good at this, I loooove it so much!
posted by
marieclaire66
on August 13, 2006 at 1:03 PM
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