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muddy little creek
in no rush to go nowhere
I love this observation and sentiment!
posted by
markng
on August 21, 2006 at 6:40 AM
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I not only anticipated it, I suggested it! Are you getting senile in your
old age! Wow! One birthday and your memory goes to pot!
posted by
swftfox
on August 16, 2006 at 4:40 PM
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Superbly anticipating Autumnal colors ahead -Did u anticipate stream haiku?
Come over and play in a few minutes, swifty! shalom
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on August 16, 2006 at 2:46 PM
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Thanks Kat and Ohhhreally! I wish I didn't have to mow but trying to sell
the house so have to water the grass so lawn looks nice. Double insult actually, have to pay for the water and then cut the grass!
posted by
swftfox
on August 16, 2006 at 10:05 AM
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Beautiful pictures
Beautiful poetry
posted by
Kat02
on August 16, 2006 at 10:04 AM
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Beautiful!
Although I do appreciate not having to mow
posted by
Ohhrreally
on August 16, 2006 at 9:34 AM
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Love this one Swft!
It's amazing how well you paint your own picture for the reader, in such a succinct manner! You've inspired me to start writing Haikus of my own. More to come soon! I'd love to hear your feedback when I'm finished!
posted by
linds026
on August 16, 2006 at 5:42 AM
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lovely relaxing pics!
posted by
marieclaire66
on August 15, 2006 at 11:51 PM
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Swiftfox
this is a very nice poem and pictures as well. Thanks for sharing.
posted by
Justi
on August 15, 2006 at 11:20 PM
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first one is wonderful beautiful picture . thanks i love it .
posted by
Rosetree
on August 15, 2006 at 9:23 PM
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