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posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on August 25, 2006 at 5:54 PM
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Very good for a tired one....
...I agree with a lot of those sentiments. Sometimes I think even most of those pretty clouds these days are only vapour trails!
posted by
nonconformist
on August 25, 2006 at 2:33 PM
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Who's slower than turtles & sleepier than swift hare-SWFTFOX! Been 17 hrs
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on August 24, 2006 at 3:45 PM
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very pretty poem. I liked it. My brother always says(he's an artist)
The artist is always more judgemental of their work than the person who is absorbing it.
posted by
Root05
on August 24, 2006 at 9:18 AM
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You are a big teddy bear--I knew it-- U love Mother Erath like we do.ShaloM
Loved this one--and i prefer horses to cars, and fresh stream water versus polluted faucet water--but I am also realistic that BIG busness will NEVER let us go back.
I have a special haiku and pic for you--TURTLES.
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on August 24, 2006 at 6:36 AM
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interesting ending
the last part is great, like it. On your horse now, caveman, the cabin girl is coming.... seriously I do understand what you are saying.
posted by
marieclaire66
on August 24, 2006 at 12:46 AM
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Hi Mari-am. It was kind of a joke. I wouldn't eat a horse. In life it
would have been a dear friend and in death I would respect it the same way.
posted by
swftfox
on August 23, 2006 at 10:40 PM
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sweet poem .. thanks , but in our relegon dead animals cannot be eat by human being . sorry , yes it s may be cause to any desease ..
posted by
Rosetree
on August 23, 2006 at 10:29 PM
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