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It does express weariness very well.
posted by
babe_rocks
on August 24, 2006 at 8:37 PM
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I'm not familiar with the word "riles". Otherwise, it is a good
of some of my all night study sessions.... Getting enough sleep "was a dream some of us had."
posted by
WindTapper
on August 24, 2006 at 8:22 PM
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Good job expressing where you were in the moment
and good effort to write anyway when feeling that way
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on August 24, 2006 at 2:59 PM
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Left a post for you re: FM in my blog Marieclaire
posted by
Troosha
on August 24, 2006 at 2:50 PM
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I hear ya, Marieclaire!
Some days the body just won't keep up with the mind and ultimately shuts down the mind. That's when you have to listen to your body - let it sleep, let it rest, let it refuel at nature's pace. Hope tomorrow is a better day.
posted by
Troosha
on August 24, 2006 at 1:07 PM
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marieclaire- glad you liked it, hope it wasn't too sad.
posted by
Root05
on August 24, 2006 at 12:21 PM
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thanks for your kind wishes. nurse Taps, I am resting today!
it is not that bad, just a bit tired that's all.
posted by
marieclaire66
on August 24, 2006 at 12:15 PM
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MarieClaire, Your monumental effort was worth every word. You expressed so well what you were feeling. Now get some rest.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 24, 2006 at 10:40 AM
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MarieClaire, I truly understand some of what you are going through. There is light. There is relief. Sending you love and healing, MoonSpirit 
posted by
syzygy
on August 24, 2006 at 9:32 AM
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hope all gets well for you. After reading your comments on my poem
yesterday and heard of your loss, I wrote one for you. It is the post today. I hope you like it.
posted by
Root05
on August 24, 2006 at 8:36 AM
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Bon Jour MC66-Shalom wishes and a great Good Morning picture for you
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on August 24, 2006 at 6:16 AM
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Marie claire
I have cronice pancreastites it is very pain full that has caused me to be dibetic I have degenterive disk disease in my back that has caused nerve sever damage in my legs I am starting to have problems with my kidneys my kidneys are in the 3rd stage of renal failure and soon they want to put me on dialysis and I push on everyday for my Husband my Children and Grandchildren I do understand
posted by
Kat02
on August 24, 2006 at 4:28 AM
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Marie
I feel I am on that edge now I do understand how you feel like all is lost ,I not only have the worry of everything around my home and trying to write is getting harder for me as you called it forced words I have never had this problem before I hope things get better for you my dear I will pray for you
posted by
Kat02
on August 24, 2006 at 4:14 AM
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sorry dont mean to sound so aggro.
I also have hyperthyroid, hypoglecemia, stuffed liver and adrenal exhaustion and sugar and wheat allergy. Lucky me! Oh well could be worse.
posted by
marieclaire66
on August 24, 2006 at 3:40 AM
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no need to worry, ceemarie. I refuse to worry and I don't i persevere.
I had this before for three months but worse, I am undergoing treatment, so i am going to be okay. I think I have hypoglecemia and possibly glandular fever, or both or could be going through major detox, due to back readjustment, take your pick.
Only time will tell, in the worst case scenario and permanent nerve damage, well I am already prepared mentally for this, and I would cope whatever happens. Your worrying is very kind but it does not really help. I don't want people worrying about me, positive encouragement is what I need. I am not on death door yet, I am going to be okay, trust me. I have also been exposed to chemicals, such as mercury and other products on the farm. So there could be nerve and liver damage there, the truth is I don't know, plus the other psychological factors, the ongoing traumas, and losses. Well if that does not affect the body, I don't know what will, I am amazed I have survived this far, considering, any one in my shoes might have lost their minds long ago. So I dare anyone to judge me, or patronize me.
posted by
marieclaire66
on August 24, 2006 at 3:38 AM
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marieclaire-P
Please, have you made an appointment yet? You can do something for this acute fatigues. You sound anemic or low in thyroid. It could be low blood sugar.......I worry about you. Please find out, don't
let it get the better of you first! Find out!
CeeMarie
posted by
LadyCeeMarie
on August 24, 2006 at 3:24 AM
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my own comments.
powerful images, but rhythm lacking and lack of flow, some verses are too forced, and it shows. I like some of the images but some verses need reworking, some other time perhaps. It wont appeal to most people, but I write on how I feel, and just please myself really.
posted by
marieclaire66
on August 24, 2006 at 3:07 AM
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