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Thank you Ypunday for your help and Kato2 and Najwa for your
Encouragement within your friendly comments, thanks again. Mike
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lionladroar
on September 1, 2006 at 10:47 AM
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deceving--bottem--stading--vain: useful slips & 1 homonym.Human & adorable
Your style is fresh, effective and singular. I appreciate also --from your comments on my post--yopu have an open mind, though nor "religious" yourself. This poem is a RELIGION OF LOVE--how to trust again, or trust at all. Only advice: watch those typos ( I am not vain to think I'm flawless in spelling all words, inckluding veins in my body, exoskeleton and hydrocephalus). Peace & Joy
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on September 1, 2006 at 10:37 AM
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Wow
Beautifully written wonderful pic I enjoy your work good reading is the best
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Kat02
on September 1, 2006 at 10:10 AM
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I DO NOT HAVE WORDS TO SAY BECAUSE I READ MANY TIMES AND EVERY TIME I READ I DIVE IN BEATUFULL GOLDEN DOTS COMING FROM UNCOVER PURE SOUL I DO LOVE IT THOUSANDS OF TIME
NAJWA
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NAJWA
on September 1, 2006 at 9:48 AM
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NAJWA
on September 1, 2006 at 9:44 AM
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