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Good for you.....it's nice to write the past away...

posted by _Symphony_ on September 14, 2006 at 3:55 AM | link to this | reply

Sometimes it takes a lot of courage to throw out things from the past.
I find it very hard to do, both literaly and mentaly. Maybe because even though we can forgive it's the forgetting that is so hard.  But the strange thing is how it really does seem to leave more room for new good things to take the place of the old. Hope those good things come along soon.

posted by nonconformist on September 13, 2006 at 2:42 PM | link to this | reply

SORRY  THERE IS AWORD (FLAG) I MISSPEL.......najwa

posted by NAJWA on September 13, 2006 at 2:35 PM | link to this | reply

Sounds like you had an epiphany of some nature – purge the past (metaphorically or perhaps even physically) and move forward to embrace the future.  A poem of passion of the soul and conviction.  Well done.

posted by Troosha on September 13, 2006 at 2:33 PM | link to this | reply

I HAD BEEN AT YOUR SHORE I HAD CARRIED THE BLACK SAC        AND NO WHOLE        EVERY TIME I RUN AWAY I HAVE TO CARRY MY PAST    AND ONE DAY I TOLD ME THAT I MUST NOT LOOK BEHIND MY BACK REPLACE WHAT I HAD LOST FROM LOVE AND CASH  I START ADOBT MY AMERICAN FRIENDS  TO BE MY FAMILY AND PRAY UNDER THE FALG I WROTE THOUSANDS OF PAINS AND I HAD NEVER FIND MY SHADOW AGAIN THAT WAS THE PAST.......najwa

posted by NAJWA on September 13, 2006 at 2:33 PM | link to this | reply