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Thank you all for your help and encouragement with my poem. Mike 
posted by
lionladroar
on September 15, 2006 at 8:39 AM
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lionladroars, From lullabies to regrets, this poem leaves a message with the reader.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 14, 2006 at 8:33 PM
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Great diction--wonderful word combinations and imagery
Now, I thought of the word L_I_E_S and just began singing LI_LI_LI_LI_ and together I got?
LiLIES! If you need some, get over to SAY IT IN JAPANESE -haiku and senryu by Ypun. Shalom Pal
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on September 14, 2006 at 7:04 PM
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I think a lot of work went onto this poem....
together with a lot of soul searching! I feel it does the soul good to get it all wriiten down , particularly as poetry. Clever work (I like the ending.) Hope you felt better about things after you wrote it!
posted by
nonconformist
on September 14, 2006 at 1:36 PM
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Thanks Tampi
posted by
lionladroar
on September 14, 2006 at 10:50 AM
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Picture perfect piece. 8/10
posted by
tampi
on September 14, 2006 at 10:46 AM
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Thank you Najwa 
for your review, full of encouragment and care. Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on September 13, 2006 at 8:44 PM
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Thanks Troosha, so glad you enjoyed . Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on September 13, 2006 at 8:40 PM
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I LOVE THE OLD TREE TOO IT IS REAL SURRENDER I LOVE WHAT YOU WROTE BUT LIFE IS SWEET GIVES EVERY ONE TO REPLACE WHAT REGRET OR OUR LOSS YOUR WORDS ARE VERY POWERFULL HAS A CALLING FOR A PURE SOUL TO UNDERSTAND>>>>>>>>>I READ IT MANY TIMES AND I WILL READ IT AGAIN.........najwa
posted by
NAJWA
on September 13, 2006 at 1:48 PM
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There seems to a somber mood in the air today (at least in several poems I’ve read today). Yours is particularly poignant and speaks volumes of regrets, the shame we carry, wishing we could turn back time, or hungering for different outcomes. At least that is what I drew from this piece. It is extremely powerful, Lion – I was riveted.
posted by
Troosha
on September 13, 2006 at 12:58 PM
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Thank you afzal for your thought this poem was my thought sir.
posted by
lionladroar
on September 13, 2006 at 11:37 AM
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Nice poem on politics and its correctness described by self centred.
posted by
afzal50
on September 13, 2006 at 11:24 AM
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