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nice writing.
posted by
MysticGmekeepr
on September 23, 2006 at 8:47 AM
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WE had been born from outer space we were in the sky shine stars then some one wants us to be on the Earth for completing the world we are the three soul spirit brain in one frame called body we are the tools of the life for others we are the light for who suffer every day pass by we know more wisdom and the truth of our living .....................I am realy love what you wrote because it is living in my strange thoughts about who are we?????? UNIQUE POEM
........najwa
posted by
NAJWA
on September 22, 2006 at 11:51 AM
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Love your poem because....
...I think so much about time. ( I suppose the older we get the more we do.) But it is interesting to see what others think on the subject. I have written one about it called "The Race" it is somewhere in my blogs here. Of course a lot of people believe there is no such thing, which I sometimes tend to believe. Not sure if it's an optimistic philosophy or not?
posted by
nonconformist
on September 21, 2006 at 1:56 PM
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Profoundly spoken...excellent is too tame a word for such as this!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on September 21, 2006 at 11:59 AM
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Chris
good post
posted by
Kat02
on September 21, 2006 at 11:28 AM
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Good post .
posted by
afzal50
on September 21, 2006 at 9:30 AM
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