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Glad your back

posted by dimondj2 on October 2, 2006 at 6:09 PM | link to this | reply

Great scansion, swftfox. You capture of the season so well...

posted by saul_relative on October 1, 2006 at 10:42 AM | link to this | reply

Loved R Good Word inspiration about evil. Great pics always & lovely words

Thanks my friend--have a great Book Festival weekend. There's a big one in Wash DC and I am volunteering at a table in Baltinmor a few hours each today & tomorrow. Shalom

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on September 30, 2006 at 7:41 AM | link to this | reply

Were you born in the wrong century OR are U doing the less fun job?

We miss yu and j\haiku...but GLASS comes first in this world of Bills. Best wishes, always--Neil. Shalom my friend

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on September 29, 2006 at 11:55 AM | link to this | reply

swt

Smart, crisp poetry - just like the refreshing cool air of fall.

I much enjoyed this one

Be well,
-smartdog

posted by smartdog_670 on September 27, 2006 at 9:10 PM | link to this | reply

Swftfox, This is a beautiful Autumn/Thanksgiving poem and picture. It seems as if it should be put to music and sung together.

posted by TAPS. on September 26, 2006 at 12:03 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks for stopping by. I am in a world of hurt here and busting my

butt to try to get out of it. No money and no help. I'll try to get around in a day or so and see everybody.

posted by swftfox on September 25, 2006 at 10:59 PM | link to this | reply

Thought I would stop by

Thought I would stop by and see how things where going in Your world. Haven't seen you around writing with Jewel Blog so thought i'd come see if you where still around. Glad to see you are.

Jewel

dimondj2

posted by dimondj2 on September 25, 2006 at 10:27 PM | link to this | reply

I bet you could write on HYFDRANGEA a haiku to make up for lackadaisical

days and nights...but the bard in you shone yesterday. Man you must have cloned the Bard and put his quill into thine finger (Don't ask which finger now). Here's inspiration...

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on September 25, 2006 at 5:02 PM | link to this | reply

Fall is my favorite time of year!

posted by shelly_b on September 23, 2006 at 7:25 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Bhaskar.ing and Marie Claire and all others for your

kind words. Ypunday, my friend, love the pic, albeit late. Any chance of getting the flip side? humm?lol thanks.

posted by swftfox on September 23, 2006 at 3:29 PM | link to this | reply

since everyone else got this, may as well drop your copy off before I go

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on September 23, 2006 at 10:01 AM | link to this | reply

swftfox

The trees are gold and scarlet
Cloaked, befitting any king.
Their branches bare of summer birds
Whose farewell they did sing.

Being reminded of a real-life experience, those lines just as if spoke to me. Excellent!

posted by Bhaskar.ing on September 23, 2006 at 4:04 AM | link to this | reply

Swftox ! your poem in Ypun's corner was awsome!

Forgot to go there, I guess I am out of the habit...

posted by marieclaire66 on September 23, 2006 at 3:39 AM | link to this | reply

Dave the picture-gift below anticipates all seasons--& thanx 4 gr8 pics all

the time...when you are not making ART for sale. How's that going...I pray it will reard u as handsomely as u invest in haiiku & art. In His name, Amen.

always--Neil. S_H_A_L_O_M

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on September 22, 2006 at 2:08 PM | link to this | reply

swtfox

wow...very nice.

posted by cosy on September 22, 2006 at 12:23 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you one and all. I love autumn probably more than any other season.

No wonder it is in autumn that we give thanks.

posted by swftfox on September 21, 2006 at 8:34 PM | link to this | reply

Is beauty in irises from dilations or from palpitations? Beauty enough

........Shalom

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on September 21, 2006 at 6:40 PM | link to this | reply

A beautiful piece! And you cover so many nuances of the season with such grace and melody.

posted by Troosha on September 21, 2006 at 4:31 PM | link to this | reply

Hi Dave

Well I can see how fauxtrains are constructed, but there may well be more than meets the eye. What are the essential ingredients?