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posted by
shypettite
on September 27, 2006 at 8:22 PM
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cosy
You are a case to study. The whole idea takes a twist in the last line, so as to make a reader go through it again from the start. At least this is what happened to me. But why the masochistic delight in your annual mourning? Loved the essence, which is so evocative and excites imagination. You are magnanimous in your magnetism, cosy, the dear.. Bhaskar
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on September 26, 2006 at 1:15 AM
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cosy
Wow, what a great poem. I felt the sting of loss in your words.
posted by
avant-garde
on September 25, 2006 at 3:44 PM
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Troosha
Little do you know how much that means to me. In my eyes you are a wonderful poetess...and you just made my day all the brighter, really!
posted by
cosy
on September 25, 2006 at 11:17 AM
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Jayci
thank you for dropping in! Hope to hear from you again. Hugs~
posted by
cosy
on September 25, 2006 at 11:15 AM
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Bhaskar
You are the water to sun-dryed lips, your words touch deep.
Always.
posted by
cosy
on September 25, 2006 at 11:14 AM
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Afzal
That's quite a compliment
thank you!
posted by
cosy
on September 25, 2006 at 11:13 AM
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Your sadness and loss leaps off the page (screen). Your playfulness with words is remarkable – always taking shape and form and ultimately communicating your mood.
posted by
Troosha
on September 25, 2006 at 10:00 AM
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This my type of poetry
keep blogging
posted by
Jayci75
on September 25, 2006 at 9:45 AM
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cosy
It must be too good good a poetry from the response that I have just seen. It races my heartbeat and I am holding my excitement till I read with concentration a little later. So that's not my comment yet.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on September 25, 2006 at 8:20 AM
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You definitely are a poetess of a high class.
posted by
afzal50
on September 25, 2006 at 8:19 AM
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Najwa
thx u from the heart...
posted by
cosy
on September 25, 2006 at 8:03 AM
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COSY YOUR WORDS TOUCHED MY SOUL IN THE DEEPSELF AND TRANSLATE for me YOUR PAIN ...... BUT WE CAN GIVE OUR LOST LOVE TO WHO REALY NEED IT AND PAINTING THE SMILE ON LONLY CHILD FACE.....
...... I LOVE YOUR POEM IT IS THE LOVE ITS SELF...
.....najwa
posted by
NAJWA
on September 25, 2006 at 7:34 AM
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cosy--
such a visceral, heartbreaking poem that cuts deep. I am left speechless.
posted by
Julia.
on September 25, 2006 at 7:18 AM
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Kat
No Kat, don't feel bad. It took me 6 years to move on, but I remember her with love and I set her free so she may find her peace. I have undergone a lot of trials and tribulations, but so has everyone else. You too can count on me if you ever need to talk. You know my email...and I admire your courage, and humble heart. You are a sweetheart
. Thank you Kat.
posted by
cosy
on September 25, 2006 at 6:44 AM
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Cosy
That is so sad and I think you have suffered enough please try and stop and think about you what you need and want I feel so bad for you please if you ever need anything at all I am here for you my friend
posted by
Kat02
on September 25, 2006 at 6:40 AM
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