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scramble

I like this.

posted by MysticGmekeepr on September 28, 2006 at 9:49 AM | link to this | reply

Scramble

Nostalgically sentimental, reminiscing and tenderly remind ing Paul to remember. Very nice!

posted by Bhaskar.ing on September 28, 2006 at 5:14 AM | link to this | reply

Very good. Smart rhyming. Sharp content.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on September 28, 2006 at 4:37 AM | link to this | reply