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This was a very heartfelt poem. I think we all worry for our children when
.......we think of the life experience we have had. We are worried it will rub off onto them. But often things turn out better for them as we are aware enough to guide them in a safer direction. The trouble is we still keep wottying even when they are grown up. Still it wouldn't be nice to have no-one to worry about.
posted by
nonconformist
on October 2, 2006 at 11:39 AM
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Chris
My Mother had a nervous break down it had taken her years to recover luckly her kids were old enough to take care of her you have done well with working on your problems I no this is an old poem of hurt and pain I see your heart in it I am glad your better now and can deal with your life good luck my friend
posted by
Kat02
on October 2, 2006 at 6:36 AM
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LOVING words
kind thoughts
helping hands
pure soul of human in your lines
you are the poet I read
and for my words you lead
I smile because we share the music of the soul most of the time..
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.....najwa
posted by
NAJWA
on October 2, 2006 at 5:50 AM
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Scramble...
I really like the last line.
posted by
jacentaOld
on October 2, 2006 at 4:50 AM
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Thoughtful and hopeful at the end.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on October 2, 2006 at 4:42 AM
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