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Hi Shypettite
Spooky, feel this one had, I enjoyed
tho. Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on October 16, 2006 at 5:55 AM
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posted by
star4sky5
on October 6, 2006 at 9:24 PM
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posted by
MasonGarrett
on October 6, 2006 at 6:08 PM
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Shypettite, isn't that a great tree. This haiku fit right in with the pic.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 4, 2006 at 10:13 PM
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Very nicely done.
posted by
BrightIrish
on October 4, 2006 at 9:09 AM
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shy
very nice...
posted by
Offy
on October 4, 2006 at 5:52 AM
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Trying to understand how a shadow can hide in a cave
posted by
Straightforward
on October 3, 2006 at 8:09 PM
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Thanks Shy---if u leave out "have" in Line3, it would work as well. I bear
a gift of Banyan and mermaids
keep on keeping on! Haik away with the waves (of writing poetry, prose, peace) Shalom, Neil
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on October 3, 2006 at 2:36 PM
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Well wrote Shypettite, very good imagery burst. Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on October 3, 2006 at 1:04 PM
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Ypundy cliks
Well written
posted by
Kat02
on October 3, 2006 at 2:13 AM
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Well done. Must have a go myself.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on October 3, 2006 at 1:04 AM
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