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Thanks Marieclaire, flu as flown
I waved goodbye just the one child left of mother FLU, named Stinking cold 
When among the shivers of fever, feeling weak as you titer inside your vulnerable fingertip clinging rock face, let go with one hand, dangle, open your sweat glands, then let yourself drop into the ink pot. Sometimes the splashes make sense. Thank you again friend 
for your encouragement
Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on October 7, 2006 at 6:22 AM
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I think your magic pills work better than mine....
I was asked what I was on... but you sure have swallowed double dose, whatever it is...Your imagination is incredible, for a moment I was stranded on the shore of reality, bewildered as I watch others enjoy themselves with your poem, not wanting to be the one left out, I had to reread the whole thing, again, till something went "bling" in my head, (did you hear it???), suddenly a dim light went on, and I understood, and enjoyed the wild ride. I think your flu is having interesting side effects on your brain, pity about the flu, but we are enjoying the benefits of your feverish brain...
posted by
marieclaire66
on October 6, 2006 at 11:39 PM
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Thank you Shypettite
For your encouragement friend, so glad you enjoyed. Mike 
posted by
lionladroar
on October 6, 2006 at 10:16 AM
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Thanks Neil
For the weed photo, who has the right in calling some flowers weeds ?
posted by
lionladroar
on October 6, 2006 at 10:07 AM
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Your second poem is amazing, so vivid and full of thoughts.
Really good one!
P.S. Thank you for your words.
posted by
shypettite
on October 5, 2006 at 5:24 PM
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Wow! You have a writer's heart and passion. Enjoyu the colors& word combos
I leave you a gift of weeds (Haiku theme....for what it's worth. Until suggestions flood in, LOL):
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on October 5, 2006 at 3:05 PM
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Cheers Dave
You don't know just how near your thoughts are mate, I am flued and delirious, more hot toddys please
posted by
lionladroar
on October 5, 2006 at 9:48 AM
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Wow. That was a good one. Like Julie Andrews on acid. Excellent.
I felt like I was on a fairground ride in your head.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on October 5, 2006 at 9:36 AM
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Hi Noncomformist
I am grateful for the encouragement. Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on October 5, 2006 at 4:01 AM
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Thank you TAPS
Your very kind friend. Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on October 5, 2006 at 3:48 AM
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I could picture all this happening as I read it. (As writing should be!)
posted by
nonconformist
on October 4, 2006 at 3:06 PM
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lionladroar, how entertaining is your work. But, the reason it is entertaining is that there are parallels so true to life for each of us.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 4, 2006 at 1:17 PM
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Thank you Troosha
I appreciate your honest comment friend, I believe we do, one and all. Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on October 4, 2006 at 12:11 PM
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I loved the humanness of the moment you described. We’ve all had them!
posted by
Troosha
on October 4, 2006 at 12:05 PM
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Great in seeing you. . .
Bhaskar. ing, thanks for the encouragement. Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on October 4, 2006 at 11:41 AM
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Cheers Tony, hope you and yours are well
Seventies rock great stuff, I was always playing Free, infact still am, but not at the moment, the dreaded flu, is here with runny nose playing hot and cold, beating drums inside my head. Thanks again, friend 
posted by
lionladroar
on October 4, 2006 at 11:38 AM
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Thank you Kato
Always nice seeing you here, friend. Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on October 4, 2006 at 11:28 AM
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Cheers Smartdog, thanks for the encouragement 
posted by
lionladroar
on October 4, 2006 at 11:25 AM
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Thank you afzal
For your encouragement friend. Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on October 4, 2006 at 11:22 AM
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Hi Shypettite
Thank you so much for your verse and time friend. Mike 
posted by
lionladroar
on October 4, 2006 at 11:20 AM
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Thank you Mariclaire
Yes all I dare do is sneak a peek, my wife owns me, plus one large elephant gun 
posted by
lionladroar
on October 4, 2006 at 11:16 AM
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Lionladroar
F a N T A s t i C ! ! !
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on October 4, 2006 at 11:03 AM
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Great photo: who is it!!!!
Actually Lad it reminds me of some early seventies rock band's album picture. That's good, by the way. Mind you, I wouldn't wanna meet you in a dark alley. Great poems by the way. With some nice humorous touches.
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 4, 2006 at 10:50 AM
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Lion
Enjoyed it very much
posted by
Kat02
on October 4, 2006 at 6:39 AM
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Lad
Nice poem with great rhythm. I enjoyed it :).
Be well,
-smartdog
posted by
smartdog_670
on October 3, 2006 at 9:38 PM
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Beautiful post .
posted by
afzal50
on October 3, 2006 at 7:39 PM
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Very vivid. As comment to your Italian picture, something about Latinos.
Latino Angels
They hide the wings
in the boots of their
expensive cars.
They wear dark glasses
and gold jewellery.
In the night clubs
they dance salsa
with devil charm
and laugh too laud
to cover shyness.
They love women
in tears, who after sunset
will fall asleep
in Angel's wings.
posted by
shypettite
on October 3, 2006 at 6:07 PM
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Hi, what were you doing staring at ladies??? naughty!
hope you are well too. I see you enjoyed the ride....got another one in store for tonight...just a different means of transportation.
posted by
marieclaire66
on October 3, 2006 at 6:00 PM
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