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Scramble
It takes but one second for an accident to happen I'm glad she is fine

posted by Kat02 on October 11, 2006 at 9:47 AM | link to this | reply

Scramble
Loved the poem immensely, and the lesson of slip and fall.!

posted by Bhaskar.ing on October 10, 2006 at 8:26 AM | link to this | reply

Symphony-Thanks

posted by Scramble on October 10, 2006 at 4:56 AM | link to this | reply

oooh poor emily...

posted by _Symphony_ on October 10, 2006 at 3:12 AM | link to this | reply

Taps and Troosh-thanks for your comments.
We used to have a small boat on the river Camb.moored up at a marina. It was great until my osteoarthritis got was and instead of being 'captains mate'-I was a liability.So we sold that-bought an old Camper van and go back some w/e park on the bank.Have made some smashing mates-and this happened at the w/e to my friend's 15 year old! Thank goodness she was ok.

posted by Scramble on October 9, 2006 at 2:11 PM | link to this | reply

Scramble, I've been there and done that except no flag involved. 

posted by TAPS. on October 9, 2006 at 1:32 PM | link to this | reply

It takes but a moment, doesn't it - to slip and fall that is...

posted by Troosha on October 9, 2006 at 1:17 PM | link to this | reply