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Hi Neil thanks for your help friend
But truly only trying to portray the essex acsent as best I could friend, tho thank you anyway 
Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on October 14, 2006 at 11:37 AM
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No ! Tone it down Tony, watch it mate
Bloody cheak of it, I never fhart ! That's why I float round the world once a year, just hope I don't go pop over your house mate 
posted by
lionladroar
on October 14, 2006 at 11:34 AM
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Thank you nomcomformist
For helping out
mam, with explanation of my poem, much appreciated friend. Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on October 14, 2006 at 11:29 AM
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Hi TAPS
Hope I didn't make that much of a rude sound mam, with my berp,
turn right, look out below. Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on October 14, 2006 at 11:27 AM
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Thank you Sabsline
posted by
lionladroar
on October 14, 2006 at 11:24 AM
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Thank you Star4you friend
posted by
lionladroar
on October 14, 2006 at 11:23 AM
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another sun-like effort!
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on October 14, 2006 at 10:13 AM
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Nice to see ET again. Good post--question: Do you mean "KNOW" when u use NO
Thanks for your offerings of light and angels.
i carry flowers, sunshine in small packages, 93 million miles off. Shalom Mike!
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on October 14, 2006 at 9:43 AM
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tony! don't be so cheeky or he'll kick your butt.
I'll tell him where to find you...someone has to stand up to the poor guy!
posted by
marieclaire66
on October 13, 2006 at 4:33 PM
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Is this a self-portrait, Mike??
You really need to change your diet, you know. Whether it is or not, it is a captivating and somewhat allegorical piece that has a sound basis to it. Cheers, Tony.
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 13, 2006 at 3:44 PM
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Lion, now that I have switched on the light... I think it is very funny.
black comedy is good word, (who said that?) sorry I did not get it at first, but now I see, lucky me. Like Taps, I laughed when I read
"burped your bum", I get the picture, thankfully not the smell.
I picture the scene fully now, it finally makes sense, you have such a way of presenting dark themes in such a light hearted way...Whacky, quirky, makes me squirm, laugh cry all at the same time...I want to kick the dad's ass into gear, out of his grotty armchair...He won't grow wings in a hurry, horns more likely. the angel description is priceless, funny...
posted by
marieclaire66
on October 13, 2006 at 2:48 PM
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Aha, a black comedy poem I believe....... very good!
posted by
nonconformist
on October 13, 2006 at 2:36 PM
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lionladroar, I'm afraid that's a new one one me, "burped his bum", though I definitely get the picture. LOL Whether angel or alien, I think it just might be time to straighten up and fly right.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 13, 2006 at 2:27 PM
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Interesting
posted by
Sabsline
on October 13, 2006 at 1:41 PM
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Lion, enjoyment is not the word I would use....
the description of the father made me puke...excuse my French.
posted by
marieclaire66
on October 13, 2006 at 1:05 PM
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lion
posted by
star4sky5
on October 13, 2006 at 12:58 PM
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Yes Marieclaire
You have it friend, the drunken know-all father, Thank you friend for your understanding, hope you enjoyedmike
posted by
lionladroar
on October 13, 2006 at 12:51 PM
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Lion...
You mention pride... we all have it and you are not alone in this. We do need pride as self-respect but not misplaced pride. I hate to admit I am not sure about the message in your poem, is this a slob of a father getting a warning to buckle up before it is too late? Forgive me if I got it wrong...
posted by
marieclaire66
on October 13, 2006 at 12:40 PM
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what a way to describe the dad!
You made him look revolting. Who is the angel representing?
posted by
marieclaire66
on October 13, 2006 at 12:34 PM
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