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Thank you so much Kato
I must apologize only new of your visit in comment just now !! 
Thanks again mam
posted by
lionladroar
on October 16, 2006 at 11:14 AM
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Lion
Another great writing loved the butterfly idea
posted by
Kat02
on October 15, 2006 at 2:38 PM
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Thanks smartdog, for your encouragement friend
posted by
lionladroar
on October 14, 2006 at 6:31 PM
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Lion
Brilliant use of colour (sorry) to blaze your images into the mind. Well done - very well.
-smartdog
posted by
smartdog_670
on October 14, 2006 at 5:53 PM
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Marieclair you are you, going on is what you do, friend, its french
Thats why I feel so honored in, that you take the time in, pausing over my poems mam, thank you. I do appreciate your comments friend. Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on October 14, 2006 at 4:49 PM
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Thank you TAPS for your intrest mam
I do TAPS, tho I did advertise the gallery when I first join blogit, I thought it inappropriate after a week or so, because the linking to a adult sextoy website, named Blue Heaven Products, the owner Barry Spencer a good friend and susecsfull business man talked me into the deal, I have been pleased with my sales, cannot complain, Tho after two weeks on blogit, I stopped the link, there being many christens and people of other faiths I respect, tho I must say I received no complaints personally, I did not feel right in my heart about it. So much for the bohemian artist 
But TAPS If you wish any of my humble creations, mostly all created from driftwood and images in trees, I will send them to you by Email you can then download them mam, I wish no charge from you mam or people on blogit, your friend Mike 
posted by
lionladroar
on October 14, 2006 at 4:37 PM
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Lion, I enjoy reading your poem over and over again...
I can just follow the butterfly with my secret eye...It has movement beauty and magic as Troosha said. I also like the two contrasting images of the man and the butterfly, macho on the outside but soft heart on the inside... your poems reek of masculinity, and tenderness at the same time, hope you don't mind me saying this...you paint such vivid pictures in my mind. Who needs a T.V when we can read this...(there are a few things I would improve on, but I really do not want to spoil the moment). I really like this. Sorry to go on like this.
posted by
marieclaire66
on October 14, 2006 at 4:32 PM
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Thank you so much Afzal
I am over soon for one of your soulful searching reads and poems friend, thanks again. Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on October 14, 2006 at 4:09 PM
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lionladroar, I've always paid more attention to your poetry than I have to your art. But, I'm becoming very interested in your art. Do you have a gallery there for showing your work?
posted by
TAPS.
on October 14, 2006 at 4:07 PM
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Thank you Troosha
Hope you and yours are ok mam, your encouragement in comment is always welcomed and missed, love your art in verse Thanks again Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on October 14, 2006 at 4:05 PM
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Yuk! Tony, flys and butter, you forgot the bread mate ?
Thanks for dropping in friend. I read in one of those true life fact-books, we eat on average of 12 spiders in a three score and ten life time, we sleep with our mouths open and they crawl in ! 
posted by
lionladroar
on October 14, 2006 at 4:00 PM
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Thank you Sabsline
For floating by friend, I will float by your page also. . . Wisdom there being always found. Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on October 14, 2006 at 3:54 PM
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Marieclair I am honered
That I am the inspiration of your style, forgive my joke about publisher please mam, couldn't help myself. Tony's fault he started it over my bum burp last night 
Still your poems are flashing with imagery-colour-rhyme and a pleasure reading, I take my hat off to you, thank you also for your encouragement in helping me good luck in all you do. Michael
posted by
lionladroar
on October 14, 2006 at 3:50 PM
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Very stylish thought.
posted by
afzal50
on October 14, 2006 at 3:33 PM
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I guess even the butterfly could sense your coolness
Great Poem!
I enjoyed how the butterfly created a magical moment for you.
posted by
Troosha
on October 14, 2006 at 3:30 PM
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A butterfly is better than a fly in the butter!
Actually, I swallowed a fly today. Yuk! Lovely images and humour, Mike.
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 14, 2006 at 2:27 PM
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a truly butterfly rap; its fluttering...
posted by
Sabsline
on October 14, 2006 at 2:12 PM
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Lion thank you, you are the inspiration you know...
I could do with a bit of cash right now...I accept cheques, visa, mastercard...no problems.
posted by
marieclaire66
on October 14, 2006 at 1:50 PM
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Thank you so much Marieclair
For your free verse poem, excellent delivery and flow, I do believe in my humble opinion you have found your style mam. Thanks again for your verse in comment Mike ps have just sold it to my publisher for two thousand dollars, love you !
posted by
lionladroar
on October 14, 2006 at 1:40 PM
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who can compete with the humble butterfly wings?
man is the beast
she is the beauty
butterfly wings
fly in the face of vanity
man o man
who do you think you are?
the king of the bar!
little butterfly
laughs with all its wings
man is in a flap
cannot take the rap
butterfly sings
with open wings
welcome man
into his heart
o little butterfly
open your heart
mend our broken wings
so we can fly
little butterfly
so we can fly
in our hearts.
posted by
marieclaire66
on October 14, 2006 at 1:32 PM
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