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nonconformist-hi.I've sent you an email-but just in case you don't get it
I want to thank you-for reading and commenting on my peotry-it's been much appreciated.I have enjoyed your work too! I shall 'miss' you from the site.Good luck and take care-wish you everything you wish for yourself!Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on October 19, 2006 at 3:15 AM
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Thank you Bhaskar.ing--glad you enjoyed the read
posted by
Scramble
on October 19, 2006 at 3:12 AM
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Scramble
That was a superbly marvellous read. I felt my spirits lifting. The Devil's gloating eyes in the biginnig reading out the sins and later, the change in the expresion finally to tear upon his reading out the virtues.Then God and daybreak. It's so life-assertive. May god's blessings be upon you.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on October 18, 2006 at 10:40 PM
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What a relief when you awake from this sort of dream!
Hi Chris, did you read my note next to my poetry posts? I am leaving blogit for a while, it is just taking so much time up, but I think I may well come back later as it has been a good experience. I wish you loads of luck, I am sure you deserve it and it will come to you. Good luck and Take care!
posted by
nonconformist
on October 17, 2006 at 2:13 PM
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Hi-thanks Tonyzonit-Kat and Troosha
Yes-I do very often-remember part of my dreams-but I feel that it's because I'm still in therapy.(t'wards the end-anyway?) So my mind-(I think)-trys to fit pieces of the puzzle during sleep. Bless you all-Chris
posted by
Scramble
on October 17, 2006 at 3:10 AM
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An extrememly strong depiction
of a gruesome dream.... glad the light of day brought you back. (I know of such powerful "nightmares" and it's wonderful to wave goodbye to them).
posted by
Troosha
on October 16, 2006 at 3:35 PM
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Chris
Nicely done with some very strong words
posted by
Kat02
on October 15, 2006 at 3:13 PM
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Nicely done, Scramble.
By the way, if you can remember anything of your dreams, that is more than I can usually do. The memories seem to vanish within 10 seconds. But more likely this is symbolic. It's a good read, anyway!
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 15, 2006 at 12:03 PM
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