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Thank you so much Neil for your encouragement and help with my spelling
I will correct immediately , have not been around blogit that much this last week or so , spent some time walking and thinking, in reflection on myself being . Thanks again for your help friend. Mike 
posted by
lionladroar
on October 27, 2006 at 2:09 PM
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Mike's metaphor of the evening as a "lady", enchanting & dazzling, is high
poetry and ambitious. I suggest edit for punctuation as in "Mother Natures " where Nature's needs the apostrophe. I love the following fresh lines but I wonder if "quite" really ought to be QUIET (spelling/homonyn) and "self-assuring" might not be "self-assured". In fact, I would say "Quietly self-asuuring" OR "Quiet assurance" because it removes the confusing usage. I agree AMBIGUITY is great when called for, but this is not one of those cases, it seems to me. Overall, much enjoyment for this reader. Shalom
"Sweet acceptance, joyful birth
our inner marriage
soul and Mother Earth.
Quite and self reassuring
drinking in the still.
Before the night "
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on October 27, 2006 at 1:37 PM
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Thank you Star4you
posted by
lionladroar
on October 27, 2006 at 10:39 AM
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So true Tony thanks
for dropping by friend, hope you and yours are well. Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on October 27, 2006 at 10:38 AM
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Thank you TAPS
posted by
lionladroar
on October 27, 2006 at 10:34 AM
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very nice
posted by
star4sky5
on October 26, 2006 at 9:07 PM
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Hello Mike
A totally justified paean to that most glorious of things, the sunset. And I like the royal overtones. What is closer to real royalty than the sun or the earth in union?
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 26, 2006 at 4:12 PM
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lionladroar, There is no lovelier union than sunset and the ocean.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 26, 2006 at 11:42 AM
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Mike
Thank you yes I am feeling much better
posted by
Kat02
on October 26, 2006 at 11:05 AM
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Thank you so much Kato
Hope you and yours are well, your encouragement is always welcome 
mam. Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on October 25, 2006 at 6:58 PM
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Lion
Wonderfully written with much heart good post
posted by
Kat02
on October 25, 2006 at 5:36 PM
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Lion
Wonderfully written with much heart good post
posted by
Kat02
on October 25, 2006 at 5:36 PM
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Will be over for a read soon marieclaire
posted by
lionladroar
on October 25, 2006 at 4:09 PM
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Lion,
I just wrote another poem as a thank you for the lovely pics you sent me. I hope you dont mind. Don't take it too personally, the blue eye picture I found very haunting so I made up this poem as a response. Nothing to it, it is just to show that I like your painting/photo.
posted by
marieclaire66
on October 25, 2006 at 4:01 PM
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Julia sorry, thanks tho for your visit and time mam
posted by
lionladroar
on October 25, 2006 at 3:02 PM
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Thank you Marieclaire
For your encouragement, so glad you enjoyed mam .
posted by
lionladroar
on October 25, 2006 at 3:00 PM
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lion--
I really loved your poem...it was beautiful and very well done...but your bright yellow background really made my eyes hurt!
posted by
Julia.
on October 25, 2006 at 2:54 PM
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Wow! is all I can say and more...
beautiful metaphore and the personification works beautifully, it flows well, like the gown you depicted. A royal feast for the eyes my friend!
posted by
marieclaire66
on October 25, 2006 at 2:51 PM
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