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Neil Hi, I like them all long short and tall, mice, mouse or vole
Thank you sir your advice as been noted friend. Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on October 31, 2006 at 1:02 PM
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Thanks Tony
posted by
lionladroar
on October 31, 2006 at 12:50 PM
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Thank you Marieclarie
posted by
lionladroar
on October 31, 2006 at 12:49 PM
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Ta Troosha
posted by
lionladroar
on October 31, 2006 at 12:48 PM
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Thank you Kato mam
posted by
lionladroar
on October 31, 2006 at 12:48 PM
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what are the little critters doing here???
posted by
marieclaire66
on October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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Stanza 2 has gr8 iamges (Vessels).S3 speaks to me; stanza 3 gives thanks
--al in all a wonderful combo in MHO. I do read and re-read your shorter peoms, Mike. Maybe I am lazier with longer poems. I suggested the same to Mariclaire66.
Might I also suggest write your poems without punctuation. They will work wonderfully, I hope/think/pray...Shalom


posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on October 30, 2006 at 4:48 PM
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somehow my poem seems to be echoing yours or the other way around. Just a coincidence I suppose. Never mind, I like your poem so much, if it were chocolate, I'd eat it ...slowly.
posted by
marieclaire66
on October 30, 2006 at 3:08 PM
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this is just so sweet... and tender.
it makes you feel all gooey inside...
posted by
marieclaire66
on October 30, 2006 at 3:03 PM
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Hello Mike
Nice to read these uplifting and inspiring poems. More power to your elbow.
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 30, 2006 at 2:11 PM
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What a peaceful, tender love poem!
It's a bit of a departure from your usual style. I could feel you calmness and the love in your heart.
posted by
Troosha
on October 30, 2006 at 1:49 PM
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Mike
Wow so beautifully done what a wonderful love poem like I just told someone else that it is very special when a Man can write with such beauty about love great post Mike
posted by
Kat02
on October 30, 2006 at 1:26 PM
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