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Thanks, star4you
I'm always pleased when someone likes my "poetry," 'cause, as I keep reminding everyone, I'm notapoet. I never quite know how a given attempt might go over.
posted by
notapoet
on November 4, 2006 at 8:01 PM
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Tonyzonit
I believe you do know how I meant the line to be taken. I was aware that it was subject to interpretation. But after thinking about it I decided that I liked the ambiguity involved.
posted by
notapoet
on November 4, 2006 at 7:58 PM
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beautiful
posted by
star4sky5
on November 4, 2006 at 6:02 PM
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Hi Notapoet
That's some last line. It could be interpreted in more than one way, perhaps, but I think I know which way you meant it.
posted by
Antonionioni
on November 3, 2006 at 12:09 PM
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