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Thank you Neil !

posted by lionladroar on November 8, 2006 at 3:19 AM | link to this | reply

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on November 6, 2006 at 2:25 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks Tony hope you and yours are well friend

posted by lionladroar on November 5, 2006 at 1:48 PM | link to this | reply

Hi Mike,sorry I'm late
Intriguing and inspiring - keep putting it out!

posted by Antonionioni on November 5, 2006 at 1:25 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Marieclarie
Your not slow in understanding , I think you are quick and have excellent insight , Its my ownself who looks and finds things , in mid air but there not anywhere , thank you again for all your comments and reviews friend. Mike      

posted by lionladroar on November 5, 2006 at 1:12 PM | link to this | reply

Hi Najwa
I am So pleased you have found peace eventualy and are back with your children and walking with them in your home land . Thank you for all the encouragement you gave me, even though your own burden was great mam   Mike          

posted by lionladroar on November 5, 2006 at 1:05 PM | link to this | reply

lion,
Your poem is truly beautiful, I am sorry I am so slow in understanding but I really like this.

posted by marieclaire66 on November 5, 2006 at 1:01 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks again Neil
for your understanding Sir !!

posted by lionladroar on November 5, 2006 at 12:59 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Bhaskar.ing
Though , it was my mistake and reason for apology, thank you again sir. Mike

posted by lionladroar on November 5, 2006 at 12:56 PM | link to this | reply

I HAD HARD TIME TO FIND YOU BUT FINALLY I FOUND YOU I AM A MOTHER TOO IN THE DEEP DOWN OF MY SOUL HOW LOVELY IF I CAN SAY TO YOU HOW ARE YOU YOU ARE VERY GOOD IN TELLING THE STORY IN THE FIRM POEMS >>>>>>>
I AM WITH MY SON NOW AT DUBAI ON THE WHITE BEACHSnajwa

posted by NAJWA on November 5, 2006 at 6:58 AM | link to this | reply

We are all mothers who can become big with the Child of Peace

...or first, the Child of forgiveness. Did not Jesus show this way (and perhaps Gandhi and King?): forgive them...then peace follows. Peace and forgiveness are like siamese twins, in my opinion. Shalom ...I found an aversion to attacking even those who kill your sheep, in this poem. Shalom

 Much love and prayers for all, for peace. Neil

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on November 5, 2006 at 6:14 AM | link to this | reply

Lionladroar
I find it all quite natural and good.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on November 4, 2006 at 5:55 PM | link to this | reply

No need for sorry mam !
Marieclaire it is I whom misunderstood your comments, my mistake, thanks for always helping , as I said, I read too much into things sometimes, my mind looks for reasons to think , even if I don't wish too, it is, as if , it has a mind of its own !!!!l lol

posted by lionladroar on November 4, 2006 at 5:33 PM | link to this | reply

I was not referring to you as a person being angry, but i was referring to the character in your poem, nothing to do with any of us bloggers sorry i created a misunderstanding.

posted by marieclaire66 on November 4, 2006 at 4:08 PM | link to this | reply

Lion,
read my  I am a bit confused too...

posted by marieclaire66 on November 4, 2006 at 4:05 PM | link to this | reply

I have read again, both , Neil's and your good self's comments
Realizing my mistakes, in thinking differently too what was meant in your asking , please forgive my reading more then what was written . Mike  

posted by lionladroar on November 4, 2006 at 3:53 PM | link to this | reply

lion, sorry what are you talking about? what grudge????
Who says you bear a grudge, you are one of the kindest most thoughtful people on blogit, so rest assured there is no problem.

posted by marieclaire66 on November 4, 2006 at 3:37 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you so much Star4you
I hope you and yours are well friend! Thank you , for your encouragement friend Mike

posted by lionladroar on November 4, 2006 at 3:01 PM | link to this | reply

Hi Marieclaire hope you and yours are well friend
I am, concerned why fellow poets would imagine I could be vexed in anyway mam, I am only writing my thoughts in verse mam, from my heart , on how I see things and hopefully not preaching, just expressing myself through verse friend . I am only a simple man ? No more or less , thank you Marieclaire for your encouragement mam   Mike   x 

posted by lionladroar on November 4, 2006 at 2:57 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Neil for your gift of fruit from India
I have only written a poem , I 'am not projecting my emotions in the verse sir, I have been swapping and changing my poems from love, I hope humour , now some philosophy of my own thinking learnt from others I have met on my road in life , I have no grudge here with fellow poets and writers , why would anybody think I have ? Its only a muse of my imagination on avoiding conflict, no more or less . Please never think me any more then peaceful. Friend . May your weekend and your Sabbath be happy sir. Mike        

posted by lionladroar on November 4, 2006 at 2:45 PM | link to this | reply

very nice

posted by star4sky5 on November 4, 2006 at 2:04 PM | link to this | reply

this is beautiful language that captures my imagination.
I just want to make sure I understand you rightly though. You are the poet/shepherd tending to your flock/reader and your detractors/wolf are sending you into a rage. The sling/is your reaction/lashing out in angry words/firing shots...the message is rise above all this, and share words of wisdom, through sharpening your quill/poet sharing wisdom. is this your vision of a poet as someone like a leader sharing wise words, some kind of prophet almost...
the language you use blows me away, it is very beautiful and I would hate to miss the message behind it. So please tell me if that is what you meant to say.

posted by marieclaire66 on November 4, 2006 at 10:48 AM | link to this | reply

Magnolia and Mango--I can detect a link. More research needed, but here's a

taste fo India/Bombay

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on November 4, 2006 at 10:42 AM | link to this | reply

Hi and Shalom toward you, Mike! This piece reminds me of how to use tools &
weapons for minimum of injury. I liked the green "Hills" and apt background. Idyllic. I hope I am not projecting: we can use "paper, flute, quill" better for defense than offensive attacks?

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on November 4, 2006 at 10:28 AM | link to this | reply