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Neil--many thanks indeed for your comment and 'pictures'---Magic.
posted by
Scramble
on November 20, 2006 at 3:30 PM
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Music to my ears in so many ways. The rhythm is gorgeous, though it varied
from the 8-syllable count that is so often part of children's poetry ...I identitifed so much with many parts opf this great poem. Kudos, my friend.
my kids have taken over now...so I don't get to play around with the bigger girls!
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on November 20, 2006 at 2:53 PM
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Thank you Bhaskar.ing--I'm glad you like it.
It sounds like you may 'see' a little into star4you's future? Ha Ha.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on November 20, 2006 at 7:42 AM
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Star4you-thanks for your comment----
perhaps someone 'new' is coming into your life? Wish you fun and peace.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on November 20, 2006 at 7:40 AM
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Scramble
Some very very beautiful and evocative thoughts. Thanks for sharing.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on November 20, 2006 at 7:00 AM
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Star, but I know the meaning, dear.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on November 20, 2006 at 6:57 AM
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It's beautiful..........I was thinking of a dream I had last night
I saw some one unknown in my dream.......but I don't know the meaning.
posted by
star4sky5
on November 20, 2006 at 6:50 AM
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Thank you Troosha----
well-maybe in my dreams---or in the 'next world'-who knows? That little piece you singled out-does sound so Heavenly! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on November 20, 2006 at 2:43 AM
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Scramble
Very touching. I hope there is a time when you can;
We'll stay awhile and make a daisy chain---
then bathe beneathe a sparkling waterfall.
We'll never have to feel a 'human pain'---
nor make a 'frightened call'.
posted by
Troosha
on November 19, 2006 at 1:31 PM
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FARSAILOR--Thank you------I'm pleased you like it.
Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on November 19, 2006 at 4:42 AM
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LOVELY REMEMBERANCE
Very touching poem....
posted by
FARSAILOR
on November 19, 2006 at 3:45 AM
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