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Sounds as if she meant a lot to you at that time not only beautiful but her own Woman in so many different ways
posted by
Kat02
on November 20, 2006 at 10:26 AM
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Farsailor
Sounds like a
delightful woman - every changing and evolving (they're the best kind).
She twirls across the dance floor like froth on the sea..... wonderful line.
posted by
Troosha
on November 20, 2006 at 8:26 AM
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Farsailor, I truely loved this one. So I came back again, ending sad is bad
but god always has his plans
posted by
star4sky5
on November 20, 2006 at 7:07 AM
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posted by
star4sky5
on November 20, 2006 at 7:05 AM
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FARSAILOR
Very nicely said. Yes, as Rumored says 'captured.'
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on November 20, 2006 at 6:33 AM
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FARSAILOR, sorry to hear things didnt work out...but you've captured
her here in words..good stuff.
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posted by
Rumor
on November 20, 2006 at 6:22 AM
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posted by
shypettite
on November 20, 2006 at 4:54 AM
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Very nicely written.
posted by
Chilitree
on November 19, 2006 at 11:49 PM
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