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Thank you Bhaskar.ing for the slap on the back sir !
Yes my good lady Tina has been my partner for some twenty five or six years, though we have never married. Thank you again friend. Michael
posted by
lionladroar
on November 28, 2006 at 10:28 AM
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Thank you for the picture Neil, and encouragement . I am busy with other bits and pieces at the moment, but will post again soon. Thanks again. Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on November 28, 2006 at 5:50 AM
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Hello Mike, Is that you and your wife's photograph? Lovely!
Just as lovely as the evocative lines of you poetry.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on November 28, 2006 at 5:47 AM
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Hello Mike--star just told me she's sacred of reptiles:my haiku theme today
--so i bring you a Chameleon, similar to but ina different family from the Green Anole (or Cuban Brown Anole, that's pushing the Carolina Natives further north in the uSA). Take care--keep on keeping write on--Shalom from Neil
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on November 27, 2006 at 7:33 PM
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Thank you Star4you
posted by
lionladroar
on November 27, 2006 at 4:32 AM
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good one
posted by
star4sky5
on November 26, 2006 at 5:36 PM
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Tina And Mick
posted by
lionladroar
on November 26, 2006 at 2:16 PM
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Thank you so much Tony, I believe you are a master of the craft of words
The magic that can help others in verse, you have already inspired and given freely with your helpful reviews and I believe knowledgeable advice.Though at this moment in time, I can only honestly admire your creative sonnets , and even though my stomach twists. I cheer you on, on and on ! Good luck in all that you do Tony and family. Michael ps studying and learning feels great, thank you for your freedom in teaching ! 
posted by
lionladroar
on November 26, 2006 at 2:01 PM
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Thank you Troosha! My Tina has my heart mam, I will post a picture of myself and my love of twenty six years after these thank you's. Your thoughts are always valued mam. Michael
posted by
lionladroar
on November 26, 2006 at 1:34 PM
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Thank you Kato ! Hope you and your's are well my friend
Thank you again Kato for all your encouragement 
Michael
posted by
lionladroar
on November 26, 2006 at 1:28 PM
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I really do enjoy your poems, Mike. They are unique.
They are also so full of self-questioning, which is what makes them intriguing and interesting. They aren't obvious, the reader really has to look closely, and think about what you are saying, which isn't a criticism. It is always a pleasure to decode them. You always show such humility, which is a lovable character trait.
posted by
Antonionioni
on November 26, 2006 at 1:18 PM
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Lion
Always powerful twisting and weaving words. Who will get the key to your heart, I wonder (or who has it)?
posted by
Troosha
on November 26, 2006 at 12:49 PM
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Lion
Very powerful and strong words but an amazing poem but, Neil said It all I believe
posted by
Kat02
on November 26, 2006 at 12:25 PM
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Thank you Neil
for your great slap on the back my friend so glad in seeing you back safe and sound. Michael
posted by
lionladroar
on November 26, 2006 at 11:26 AM
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Don't change a thing (other than spelling copnventions). Mike u have GIFT
to tell us about the indivdual in a world he or she encounters, sometimes in all it's contradictions and un-beauty. I say un-beauty because, you also allude to the deep beauty in everything, but u do not try to sugar coat everything u write. So sometimes readers are shocked, or find your descriptions raw and effectively scary! So, don't change a thing u don't have to. Your voice is honest and unique.Thanks, shalom. Peace and Joy---YOU are the fount of it all. In God's image
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on November 26, 2006 at 10:27 AM
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Thank you Star4you
posted by
lionladroar
on November 26, 2006 at 8:23 AM
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Thank you Marieclaire
for your encouragement and wisdom , just thoughts on a worldly life lived and payback . Maybe in carmer in ones later years, as I have written in answer to Nawja, still just playing with feelings at the moment , seeing if they lead somewhere. Will try another verse later after some reviews. Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on November 26, 2006 at 8:22 AM
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Najwa thank you
I am really just playing around with thoughts at the moment poetry wise and am a little unsure of subject and place. Though I thank you again mam for the appreciation of my work Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on November 26, 2006 at 8:13 AM
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powerful.
posted by
star4sky5
on November 25, 2006 at 9:16 PM
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Mike some powerful thoughts and verses
Staring into mirrors, admiring
dark achievements
now full payment in hailstorm
I receive
Creeping compensation, recompense
never I pray recommence
I have no wish in turning
Poor Creeping Me
Just remember, you are forgiven! Whatever you did, don't dwell on the past. We all make mistakes. Why torture yourself. I am not saying you are, just speaking in general and for myself as well.
posted by
marieclaire66
on November 25, 2006 at 6:51 PM
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YOUR POEM HAS TWO OF FEELING FIRST THE PRIDE AND THE SECOND PAIN FROM WHAT SOMEONE DID TO YOU.......... THAT COMPATION FOR WHO IS BEHIND IS THE MEANING OF YOUR LOVING SOUL YOUR SOUL WILL NEVER LEAK
YOUR POEM IS BEAUTIFUL .............najwa
posted by
NAJWA
on November 25, 2006 at 6:46 PM
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