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A lovely tale of morals untold told with style and finesse. Loved it.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on November 27, 2006 at 4:59 AM
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Farsailor
Your poem of a great journey of life and death most interesting , I am sorry for the shorter comments I have not been well but read all of your work
posted by
Kat02
on November 27, 2006 at 4:42 AM
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THANK YOU FOR YOUR KIND COMMENTS
Fear not gentle folk, both the donkey and the soldier arose from the ashes and lived anew, if in somewhat different and humbler lives. Greece is the donkey/girl and the brave soldier is of course Great Britain. The battle was the German invasion of Greece in WWII with the subsequence fall, occupation and eventual liberation of the haughty homeland of democracy.... Wheels within wheels.
posted by
FARSAILOR
on November 26, 2006 at 11:14 PM
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ARE YOU TELLING US ABOUT MY HELEN WHO HER MOTHER WAS VENUS??
FROM GREECE SHORES TO THE WHITE SHORES OF LEBANON (ALHABEEBAH}
MY SWEET HEART COUNTRY OR YOU ARE LOOKING TO FIND THAT BEAUTY AGAIN IN ANY REASON FOR THAT STILL MAKE ME SCREAM HOW YOU KNOW ABOUT HER DREAM??????? IT IS BEAUTIFUL AND NO SURPRISE YOU ARE THE SAILOR AND I LOVE TO BE THE WHITE BIRD ACROSS THE WILD WAVES
AMONG THE ALL....
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.......thank you for the unique poem i love it.najwa
posted by
NAJWA
on November 26, 2006 at 9:57 PM
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Interesting tale
of arrogance, punishment, and redemption (albeit a little to late). Or was it?
posted by
Troosha
on November 26, 2006 at 8:12 PM
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why didn't they got better and lived for ever????????????
yOU COULD HAVE SAVED THEM.
posted by
star4sky5
on November 26, 2006 at 7:50 PM
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