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hey it's nice night

posted by star4sky5 on December 4, 2006 at 7:27 AM | link to this | reply

Night
Very beautiful - as delicate as the wings of a dragon fly. 

posted by Troosha on December 4, 2006 at 7:17 AM | link to this | reply

Night
Very beautifully done dragon flies  in the sky what a different topic yet charming , Wonderful post

posted by Kat02 on December 4, 2006 at 6:36 AM | link to this | reply

Very graceful
  

posted by Chilitree on December 4, 2006 at 6:15 AM | link to this | reply

I suspected our emotional lives were as delicate as a dragonfly...then I
saw my dog snap one out of the air and eat it so I know its true.

posted by FreeManWalking on December 4, 2006 at 5:48 AM | link to this | reply

Hello again, NM
Enjoyed this well-visualised and constructed piece. Also, the spoken lines, 'Find me' and 'Follow me' worked really well for me, they really leapt up off the screen. It really was like hearing someone's innermost wishes.

posted by Antonionioni on December 4, 2006 at 5:43 AM | link to this | reply

Nice poem.

posted by afzal50 on December 4, 2006 at 5:38 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful!

posted by allyk on December 4, 2006 at 5:30 AM | link to this | reply

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on December 4, 2006 at 5:24 AM | link to this | reply

VERY NICE
DRAGONFLYS SO BEAUTIFULLY DIFFERENT. NICE POEM. 

posted by FARSAILOR on December 4, 2006 at 5:20 AM | link to this | reply