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Pull
Thanks for the comments guys. I had a feeling some of you on here would understand what I'm talking about, the pull between people and the universal connectedness, better than the average person.
posted by
NightMajik
on December 5, 2006 at 5:28 PM
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Night
Very nicely done once again
posted by
Kat02
on December 5, 2006 at 10:53 AM
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Something definitely attracts us to others like gravity.
It's a shame they're sometimes impervious to its pull. They must be weightless! An actual connectedness is also a true depiction when two people are truly a good match for each other. The sad thing is, we may never see them, but that invisible connection exists, nevertheless. Thanks for sharing this.
posted by
Antonionioni
on December 5, 2006 at 10:30 AM
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Night
"Woven like gauze" - a beautiful way to describe human or Universal connection. Beautiful poem.
posted by
Troosha
on December 5, 2006 at 7:23 AM
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Very nice, NightMajik. You must be a very busy young lady with your studies, writing, music and dancing.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 5, 2006 at 4:49 AM
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And sings so beutifully in you poem
posted by
SoloVale
on December 5, 2006 at 3:57 AM
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