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posted by
Rosetree
on April 11, 2007 at 10:07 PM
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NAJWA---I have same feelings as you---
not around my country-but around my 'biological parents'.I have always lived in my own 'BUBBLE'.I believe you come from or belong to-wherever your HEART BELONGS!
Love you-God bless-Chris.x
posted by
Scramble
on December 18, 2006 at 3:38 AM
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I AM ALL MY LIFE SINCE I BORN STRANGER HAS NO ORIGENAL HOME COUNTRY THAT IS WHY I WAS WONDERING AM I BELONG TO WHO?????
AM BELONG TO THEFREE LAND WHICH HAS ALL MY YEARS MY HISTORY MY TEARS MY HAPPINESS MY LOVE MY ILLNESS MY DREAMS I LOVE TO BE BELONG TO HER THE RED WHITE BLUE>>>
>>>>BECAUSE I LOVE THE ALL AND YOU,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,najwa the stranger
posted by
NAJWA
on December 18, 2006 at 3:25 AM
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Thank you for popping in NAJWA.
No-I wrote this poem for ME! However-you have always said that we-you and I-have 'come out of the same sac'----so I think perhaps it fits for you too? The problem is-this poem is almost a question---and I don't think it can be answered? Maybe-as two people who have are so similar-we can 'belong' together--and other 'similar' people can join 'us'-then we may begin to understand-what it feels like/is--to 'belong'? Love Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on December 18, 2006 at 3:09 AM
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I AM SORRY CHRIST I MISSED THE WORDS DID YOU WRITE THIS POEM ABOUT ME OR NOT??????????THAT IS WHAT I WANT TO WRITE,,,,
,,,,,yr friend najwa
posted by
NAJWA
on December 17, 2006 at 2:40 PM
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I WAS WONDERING IF YOU WROTE THIS POEM OR NOT BUT I AM REALY WHO WANT TO KNOW WHERE I CAN BE BELONG TO IT HERE ORE THERE AND WHO LOVES ME I AM REALY BELONG TO HIM (RED WHITE AND BLUE) I AM BELONG TO YOU......
....................najwa the stranger
posted by
NAJWA
on December 17, 2006 at 2:36 PM
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afzal50-thank you too-for your comment.
Happy Christmas.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on December 17, 2006 at 8:37 AM
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Tonyzonit-Thank you.
I suppose there are two sides to everything.Happy Christmas-Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on December 17, 2006 at 8:36 AM
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Nice poem.
posted by
afzal50
on December 17, 2006 at 7:42 AM
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Hi Scramble
Nicely written. I think it's nice to feel we belong, but we don't have to belong if we don't want to. Some people need to feel that more than others, I think.
posted by
Antonionioni
on December 17, 2006 at 6:22 AM
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