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awesome writing. u write so well,,,,,,,,

posted by star4sky5 on December 18, 2006 at 10:48 PM | link to this | reply

BEAUTIFUL NIGHT MAJIC STILL ON MY PROMICE IWILL WRITE ABOUT THE DREAMS

posted by drohan254 on December 18, 2006 at 9:27 PM | link to this | reply

Mweee
Thanks for the comments you guys, I'm so happy you enjoyed this.

posted by NightMajik on December 18, 2006 at 6:46 PM | link to this | reply

Very enjoyable and imaginative word play as usual!

posted by Antonionioni on December 18, 2006 at 4:01 PM | link to this | reply

Night
This is wonderful! 

wearing the shade-ow of palms for eyes
with sparkling mascara of dangerous dreams     
Beautiful lines!


posted by Troosha on December 18, 2006 at 8:04 AM | link to this | reply

Nice poem.

posted by afzal50 on December 18, 2006 at 4:07 AM | link to this | reply