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TAPS- , thanks for the comment. I'm glad you understood this poem, and that it could reach you in some way.
posted by
NightMajik
on December 21, 2006 at 6:54 AM
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NightMajik
This is indeed magical. In truth, the magic is that most of us have experienced those feelings and asked ourselves those type of questions. I know that I have and that is why it speeks to me and sort of gives me goosebumps.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 19, 2006 at 8:54 PM
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Thank you
Thanks for the comments you guys. This poem represents a lot and it's helpful to receive such comments.
Troosha: "full of love, doubt, and beautiful memories" you summed it up so perfectly, thank you.
stbond, I'm sorry for your loss, I think it's wonderful if you can turn to writing to help move forward. I believe fully in the power of pen and paper (or computer screen and keyboard, as it were).
posted by
NightMajik
on December 19, 2006 at 8:32 PM
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Very melodic; very evocative - great work. MoonSpirit 
posted by
syzygy
on December 19, 2006 at 5:51 PM
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I like 'the song of your lashes.'
Such a visual gift with words.
posted by
Antonionioni
on December 19, 2006 at 3:41 PM
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very beautiful night majic
posted by
drohan254
on December 19, 2006 at 11:33 AM
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I lost someone. . .
this year too and am starting again. Writing helps. Your poem is very pretty.
posted by
stbond
on December 19, 2006 at 11:00 AM
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Night
What a wonderful poem - full of love, doubt, and beautiful memories.
posted by
Troosha
on December 19, 2006 at 7:36 AM
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Beautiful poem.
posted by
afzal50
on December 19, 2006 at 4:49 AM
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