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shadow, it's very nice....
posted by
star4sky5
on January 5, 2007 at 5:55 PM
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Ace
we do tend to grant access to our harts to freely at times given how vulnerable it is.but not to would be worse great post
posted by
SoloVale
on January 5, 2007 at 5:00 PM
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Hi ShadowPen - some valid points from a non-neutral point of view...
I could relate to a lot of this. After all, we are all limited by being on one side of the argument - we are not independent of thought...
posted by
Antonionioni
on January 5, 2007 at 3:30 PM
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Shadow
Granted, women can be pretty tricky to figure out but I think men can be just as mysterious in terms of what makes them tick or suddenly spin out of control. The age old challenge – the sexes trying to understand one another.
posted by
Troosha
on January 5, 2007 at 3:14 PM
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YOU WROTE VERY PRETTY POEM JUST PERFECT TO WHAT YOU FEEL FULL WITH SADNESS AND LOVE TO SOME ONE MAY BE DID NOT HOW MUCH YOU LOVE HER BUT I BELIEVE THAT THE MAN IS CHRISTAL GLASS AND THE WOMAN IS THE SWEET WINE IN HIM ...........THIS IS WHAT I THINK MAKE THE BEAUTY OF LOVE TO LIVE FOR EVER??????
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posted by
NAJWA
on January 5, 2007 at 2:04 PM
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Lovely
Thanks for sharing
posted by
netty21
on January 5, 2007 at 1:44 PM
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Nice poem. Thanks.
posted by
afzal50
on January 5, 2007 at 10:30 AM
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shadow-pen..you say it all so well..us "tough" men on the outside
just lovesick puppies on the inside....or hopeless romantics..

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posted by
Rumor
on January 5, 2007 at 9:55 AM
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