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Thank you Najwa for your beautiful dancing verse   A pleasant   surprise looking back through my blog pages!   Michael    

posted by lionladroar on January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM | link to this | reply

free spirits ...........thirst eyes......flowers climb in dark night hair........silent lips dipped in fresh fall.........najwa the stranger

posted by NAJWA on January 14, 2007 at 9:19 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you TAPS , females I find love to dance and laugh at least once a day, free spirits they are! I believe     Mike     

posted by lionladroar on January 12, 2007 at 1:20 AM | link to this | reply

lionladroar

I think that just about all of us females can pick something out of that poem and say, "Hey, that's me."   Somehow we relate to this.

posted by TAPS. on January 11, 2007 at 8:48 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you so much Symphony   Mike 

posted by lionladroar on January 11, 2007 at 6:18 AM | link to this | reply

I love it!!

well done...keep up the good work!

posted by _Symphony_ on January 11, 2007 at 4:00 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks Tony , for your time in witty review friend, good luck!!  

posted by lionladroar on January 11, 2007 at 12:40 AM | link to this | reply

Hi stbond

Thank you for your kind words in review friend, so glad you enjoyed    Michael

posted by lionladroar on January 11, 2007 at 12:33 AM | link to this | reply

We seem to be out of sync! And out of washing-up liquid.

Bitter sweet memories evoked very well, Mike - very enjoyable.

posted by Antonionioni on January 10, 2007 at 3:50 PM | link to this | reply

I like this very much. . .

particularly the first stanza and the soapsuds part, which I think could even stand on it's own. Yay!

posted by stbond on January 10, 2007 at 3:31 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Chilitree

posted by lionladroar on January 10, 2007 at 10:19 AM | link to this | reply

Mon ami ...

posted by Chilitree on January 10, 2007 at 9:52 AM | link to this | reply

Hi Star4you!

I don't no why I wrote rose petals they just jumped in thought into the verse friend, thank you for your encouragement though Star4you        Michael 

posted by lionladroar on January 10, 2007 at 7:50 AM | link to this | reply

wow, so beautiful...........rose petals??????????????????

posted by star4sky5 on January 10, 2007 at 7:43 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks Dave I' m so glad you enjoyed, good luck!!      

posted by lionladroar on January 10, 2007 at 6:53 AM | link to this | reply

Love it. Great picture. Rhythmic writing where the repetition makes it sing

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on January 10, 2007 at 6:38 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you Jo for the encouragement friend. Michael 

posted by lionladroar on January 10, 2007 at 4:24 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you Hana!

For your encouragement friend, hope you and yours are well! 

posted by lionladroar on January 10, 2007 at 4:22 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you so much Kato

Yes she popped back into my head last night, Colleen!. . . I was down having a pint at my local pub the Black Bull watching a tremendous game of soccer between Liverpool and Arsenal when The Liverpool supporters burst into song and they can sing, trying their upmost too get their team up and running again for they were 4  1 down at halftime. The song they sung was the Fields Of Athenry this was always a favourite of Colleen's and she would burst into song at any given time of day and place she choused.      Michael

posted by lionladroar on January 10, 2007 at 4:18 AM | link to this | reply

well that's interesting

it works that's for sure!

Jo

posted by brisbane_artist on January 10, 2007 at 4:06 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you afzal Sir!!

posted by lionladroar on January 10, 2007 at 3:38 AM | link to this | reply

Hi WaterKat!

The poem is of my first love Colleen , she pops back into my head from time too time and I am at her mercy, for she writes exactly what she likes. I often think of her and wonder what she is doing now, this verse was my answer. There are two more poems dedicated to Colleen back down my list, if you so wish. Take care WaterKat and have a great time all the time, not just for a change!    Michael  

posted by lionladroar on January 10, 2007 at 3:37 AM | link to this | reply

itis beautiful and different...i loved it friend

posted by drohan254 on January 9, 2007 at 8:33 PM | link to this | reply

Lion

Nicely done and love the pic

posted by Kat02 on January 9, 2007 at 7:04 PM | link to this | reply

Lovely poem.

posted by afzal50 on January 9, 2007 at 6:39 PM | link to this | reply

You wrote me...

Wow, this sounds so much like me!  Im so curious as to what inspired you to write a poem such as this.      Regards... 

posted by WaterKat on January 9, 2007 at 6:26 PM | link to this | reply