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wow........I anot blocked, but sensed.......HAHAHA
Thanks for letting me in.
posted by
star4sky5
on January 15, 2007 at 10:22 AM
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Troosha - Isn't it wonderful when that one true love comes along?
Then a strange metamorphasis happens to all of us....bringing out all those wonderful joyful feelings and then expressing them in such a delightful manner?
posted by
shadow-pen
on January 12, 2007 at 1:09 AM
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drohan254 -tks for kind comments. keep in touch.....
posted by
shadow-pen
on January 12, 2007 at 1:07 AM
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Straightforward tks for your appreciation.
posted by
shadow-pen
on January 12, 2007 at 1:04 AM
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Shadow-pen, that was a breath-taking poem!
posted by
Straightforward
on January 11, 2007 at 6:14 PM
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YOUR SOUL IS THE LIGHT FOR YOUR LOYALTY AND TRUE LOVE LIVES IN YOUR IDENTY,,,,
,,,,,IF I CAN WRITE MORE .....
.....I WILL CALL YOU THE LOVE SHORE ALL THE OCEAN PEARLS WITH ITS PINK SHELL HAVING HOME IN YOUR LOVING HEART AND YOUR PEN IS THE TRUE UNENDLESS FRESH STREAM.....
.....the stranger,,,,,
,,,,najwa
posted by
NAJWA
on January 11, 2007 at 11:00 AM
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YOU have very deep feeling where you cant find the beauty
the ear some time love before eye this is asubject we can write about ..but is the eye will much the ear and the years .....i will write later beautiful
posted by
drohan254
on January 11, 2007 at 9:53 AM
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Shadow
Sometimes it takes a loving experience to awaken us or make us feel less a “stranger” in this big world. This is a beautiful poem and I especially enjoyed this line:
She was the smile within my heart, the light within my eyes,
posted by
Troosha
on January 11, 2007 at 8:16 AM
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Excellent poem.
posted by
afzal50
on January 11, 2007 at 6:59 AM
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